Hey guys this is a new story beacause got some (very little) good reviews and i shut down my other story so this is going to be the same plot and setting just a little different then my other story. Im not do that crap about voting and stuff cause i know most of you dont give one **** about it. please give me bad reveiws (only if what u say is true) and tell me what to improve. if you dont give a bad review thank you and please keep reading. thank you guys and on to the story!
Percys Pov
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Pain. All i could feel was pain. My soul being destroyed like ice in boiling water. Here?, I thought" really here? this is where I am to die? this is what i get for saving them? (changing the font) "NO" i thought sternly to myself thi- this is a dream, yeah a dream I thought hopefully. But deep down i knew that each and every one of them are here killing me piece by istsy bitsy tiny piece, I thought sickenly to myself. Ho-how could they betray me so quickly. I thought the gods were good" i thought my friends were real. Were all of the good times fake, not real, un existing?. My friends , my family, my- my love. Why couldnt they see who really did this?. What had happended to them?. i looked sadly at my former family as they relentlessly went on with the torturing but the pain isnt what hurt it was the betrayel. It was like watching them tear out my heart, squishing it till it was dust and making me eat for lunch,breakfast and dinner and then stabbing me in the back for desert. I spit out some blodd as she began to torture me again. she was always the wor- BOW AT MY FEET YOU PEASENT! she yelled interupting my thoughts. I shakily stood up cause i was tied at my feet and hands, I stood up wobbled over to her and spit all the blood in her face.
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Percys Pov
She threw up in disgust all over the olympian floor witch wierdly satisfied me. Then she got up and stabbed me in the shoulder. I screamed as she kicked me over and over and started to slash and hack away at my chest. i hadnt forgoten how it came to this. How they betrayed me. How they left me. Heres how they destroyed the very soul essence of Perseus Achilles Jackson.
Flash back
I dodged rolled and slashed trying to get away from the seriously fast snapping jaws. today was a very special day I Percy Jackson was proving myself so I could marry the love of my life Annabeth chase " oh annabeth" I said with a sigh. A huge snapping ladon jaw interrupted my thoughts so I decided to focus on the battle. 3 heads the size of Zeus's ego came at me really fast I 360 slashed all three heads of ladon. we studied each other for a long time when suddenly he made a wrong move, all of the left side of heads came at me leaving his whole left side uncovered. I just needed to get around the heads coming at me right now. I backed up jumped and used his heads like stepping stones, I back flipped of the last head and Spartan threw my sword in the top of his body where his heart was. I fell to the ground in a tired heap. I saw a bright flash and Athena goddess of wisdom came out. I quickly bowed and waited for her to talk. Percy Jackson she said, I recommend you get back to camp half blood, she spoke with a weird gleam in her eye. your friends are waiting, she said. Um ok lady Athena. And with that she flashed me away.
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I landed with a sigh as the ripe strawberrys gave an amazing aroma making me feel right back home. As I pasted Thals pine tree I thought about mine and annabeth's life together, our future and what fate had to offer. I stuffed my hands in my pockets and walked to my cabin. I leapt in to my comfy bed as I barley registered anything else around me and kept thinking about my future until I fell into a deep long badly needed sleep. I was in space floating helplessly when a guy with a really uncomfortable aura appeared. He asked if I wanted to leave my friends. Who does this guy thin- I am chaos creator of the universe and im trying to help you, do u accept? I declined knowing I could never betray my friends like that they would do the same for me right?
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I woke with very loud chanting " wow its morning already" I thought, better get ready. I took a two second shower and got myself ready for my proposal for annabeth. I walked to the amphitheater to see everyone partying, wondering I asked someone to explain" whoo! yea man its the death of percy jack- oh **** he yelled as he did a double take "its percy!. Wait whats going on here? I spoke, we hate you percy! " bu- but why?"your the one who got the campers killed in the war, annabeth told us. Annabeth told you that? I said crying, yes! I heard annabeth yell she came up to me slapped me and stabbed me in the shoulder then she whispered in my ear, ill torture you until you die you dirty piece of filth I will always be with you telling you how you failed everyone this is for luke!, I tried to run but the betrayel had hit me hard and they eventually caught me they brought me to Olympus and every god including my own father tortured me! only few tried to defende me one of them being artemis goddess of the moon and the hunt. I watched as they tortured me for days, I couldn't stop the tears that fell and they will keep falling until I them back! THEY WILL RUE THE DAY THEY EVER THOUGHT OF BETRAYING PERCY JACKSON!
Hey guys thats it tell me if you like or if you didnt :( THE next chapter is going to be about how percy escapes and finds chaos or chaos finds him. I don't know what will happen in this story find out next time on (always wanted to say that :) ) ok well tell me what you think review and im out. BYEEEEEE