(I'm sorry if anyone noticed my spelling mistake when I first posted this
up. I'm not a good speller, I know it, and my English teacher knows it
aswell. If you see anymore please feel free to let me know, and I will
correct it. So, reposted, all spelt correctly this time (I think) here is
my poem.)
This poem came as a sudden inspiration while I was watching The Two Towers (for the 7th time). It is set in Osgiliath, the scene where Frodo is being hypnotised by the ring, and for a brief instant you see things through his eyes, when Sam is talking, but Frodo can't hear him. It's from Frodo's point of view, but there is one and a half verses where it is Sam talking.
Disclaimer: All I own is the poem. Not the characters, not the story, so please don't sue me.
Sam your lips are moving
I can't hear what you say
We shouldn't even be here
But there's no other way
His eye is almost on me
The ring it seems to grow
It can feel him searching
To him it wants to go
The Nazgul are attacking
There's chaos all around
You tell me it will be all right
But I can't hear a sound
My mind the ring takes over
The old Frodo has gone
I'm ready to give it to him
To let him have The One
You run up and you stop me
For that you have to die
My blade is drawn across your neck
"It's me" I hear you cry
And finally I hear your voice
"Don't you know your Sam?"
What's wrong? What is the matter with me?
I no longer know who I am
"I can't do this Sam," I say
"I Know" you sigh "its all wrong"
"You're not the same Frodo I used to know
You've carried the burden too long"
"The ring has taken hold of you
You lie in the shadows of fear
But in the end, the darkness will pass
The sun it will shine out more clear"
I feel better for listening
And though my path is grave
I'll fight for the goodness in the world
I'll fight for my Samwise the brave.
Let me know what you think, I love to hear from everybody!
This poem came as a sudden inspiration while I was watching The Two Towers (for the 7th time). It is set in Osgiliath, the scene where Frodo is being hypnotised by the ring, and for a brief instant you see things through his eyes, when Sam is talking, but Frodo can't hear him. It's from Frodo's point of view, but there is one and a half verses where it is Sam talking.
Disclaimer: All I own is the poem. Not the characters, not the story, so please don't sue me.
Sam your lips are moving
I can't hear what you say
We shouldn't even be here
But there's no other way
His eye is almost on me
The ring it seems to grow
It can feel him searching
To him it wants to go
The Nazgul are attacking
There's chaos all around
You tell me it will be all right
But I can't hear a sound
My mind the ring takes over
The old Frodo has gone
I'm ready to give it to him
To let him have The One
You run up and you stop me
For that you have to die
My blade is drawn across your neck
"It's me" I hear you cry
And finally I hear your voice
"Don't you know your Sam?"
What's wrong? What is the matter with me?
I no longer know who I am
"I can't do this Sam," I say
"I Know" you sigh "its all wrong"
"You're not the same Frodo I used to know
You've carried the burden too long"
"The ring has taken hold of you
You lie in the shadows of fear
But in the end, the darkness will pass
The sun it will shine out more clear"
I feel better for listening
And though my path is grave
I'll fight for the goodness in the world
I'll fight for my Samwise the brave.
Let me know what you think, I love to hear from everybody!