This is my first Narnia fic it was harder then I thought it would be.
Narnia was out numbered they were slowly being closed in by the Telmarines. Catapults were sending boulders through the air. Peter, Caspian and Edmund were all fighting three soldiers at once.
Peter looked at the battle surrounding him. There was no way that they could possibly win. They had sent Lucy to find Aslan and she had yet to return.
Peter looked as the How Caved in on top of the soldiers. He looked up as a boulder flew past and hit the ledge that Susan was standing on. Caspian ran up behind Peter, they looked at each other with worry etched across their face and then returned their gaze to Susan.
The ledge beneath her crumpled and Susan lost her balance. By some miracle Trumpkin caught on to her hand. Caspian and Peter let a momentary sigh of relief. Then Trumpkin began to lose his grip, not being able to carry her weight.
"Susan!" Peter yelled as he watched his sister fall. Her back hit the side of another ledge and then she crumpled to the ground.
Peter and Caspian fought off the surrounding soldiers. As the last Telmarine fell to the ground Caspian and Peter ran to Susan.
Other Narnians noticed what was going on and fought off any Telmarines that became close to their Kings and Queens.
"Oh, Susan," Peter let out a small cry. Her body was in an unnatural position and she was covered in her own blood.
"We need to move her, she can not stay here," Caspian said trying to put some sense into what was happening.
"There is a back entrance to the How that I know of," Caspian said. Peter slowly began to pick up his sister. "Be careful, I think her back is broken," Caspian warned.
Caspian led Peter around the back of the How. They entered and quickly laid her on the stone table.
"She is losing to much blood," Caspian said becoming very worried as he looked at the Queen. She looked so young, he could not lose the Gentle Queen. Only now that he was beginning to lose her did he realize the true feelings he had towards her.
"The chain mail and bodice are too tight, we will need to take them off if we want to bandage her," Peter said looking at Caspian. He did not really feel right undressing his sister but it was the only way, blood was already seeping through her dress.
"Help me turn her over," Peter said. As soon as Susan was lying on her stomach Peter began to undo her bodice. Her turned her over again and pulled the bodice off.
"You will need to support her while I lift off the chain mail," They lifted her up carefully and Caspian slipped behind her. She fell onto his chest. Right now this was all Caspian wanted, to hold Susan in his arms.
Peter pulled the chain mail over her head and then helped Caspian lay her back down.
Caspian pulled some cloth out of his patch and handed some to Peter to bandage Susan.
He took a strip of the bandage and began to wrap it around Susan's head moving her hair out of the way.
"Where is Lucy when we need her. That is the last time I am ever sending her away during battle," Peter said quietly.
"Lucy will return soon, and Susan will be all right. You will see," Caspian said also trying to convince himself of what he had just said.
Suddenly they hear a low groan. Caspian turned to Susan. Susan slowly opened her eyes, the first thing she saw was Caspian's worried face.
"Susan. . ." Peter said. Suddenly Susan felt all of the pains from her fall. She cried, "It hurts," she said pained etched across her face.
"You took a fall but Lucy will be here soon and all the pain will go away," Caspian said trying to comfort her. Yet, she continued to cry.
"Susan, do not cry, your body cannot take any more stress," Peter said. She began to cry harder her whole body shaking.
Then she screamed out in pain. "Susan what is it?" Peter asked trying to figure out how he could help. "My back, and my side," she whimpered.
Caspian looked at Susan's side, "Peter I think she broke her back and maybe some ribs . . ." Caspian trailed off.
Peter yelled out a curse and looked back at Susan. It seemed that she had already lost conscious again.
The fighting began to quiet down and seem more distant. Peter and Caspian wondered what was happening but refused to leave Susan's side.
Caspian looked down at Susan wearily and then was shocked by what he saw. "Peter, she is losing too much blood." Peter looked at Susan; all off the bandages they had just put on were soaked through. "Oh, Aslan help us."
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