Before you read I must tell you this is a revamped version of ch.1. So let us begin.
Aiur, the final battle,
On the home world of the Protoss race, a battle rages between the forces of Artanis, and the Golden Armanda, commanded by a possessed Selendis. The forces try to defend themselves against the attack as they do not wish to hurt their friends. The freedom of the corrupted Protoss depended on the Keystone. Artanis is trying to ward off as many zealots as he can, trying not to hurt them, but Selendis rushes in to fight Artanis. She easily defeats four zealots while rushing in to fight Artanis.
"Selendis!" Artanis shouts.
She does not hear him as she continues her assault on him.
"Hear me!" Artanis says as he as being attacked.
At just that moment, the Keystone activates, forcing Amon out of all the Protoss he had possessed. Artanis has little time to convince them to sever their nerve cords so he acts.
"Selendis, Templar! Rid yourselves of Amon! Sever your nerve cords!" Artanis says to all the Protoss with nerve cords.
Amon finally gets a chance to get out of the Keystone to try to corrupt the Templar. Selendis is hesitant at first to do so at first, but Artanis begs her to do it. Even when Amon said that Artanis's words were lies, she severed her nerve cords, ridding herself of Amon. While she is still recovering Artanis helps her up on her feet.
"En Taro Artanis!" Selendis shouts.
At this moment the rest of the Templar sever their nerve cords, ending this war. Even if it seems they were victorious, something happened to the Keystone that was not supposed to happen. While Amon was exiting the Keystone it created a large singularity, pulling all of the Templar into it. In orbit, Rohana, currently on the Spear of Adun sees the large singularity for a moment as it was to bright for her to handle. As it disappeared Rohana tried to contact the Templar on Aiur, but to no success. As she stands in the Spear of Adun she asks herself what happened and more importantly , where Artanis and the rest of the Templar went.
Unknown planet, 12:00p.m.,
"Artanis, can you hear me Hierarch?" Selendis says.
"I am fine Selendis. Wait, where are we? What happened?" Artanis says in confusion.
Artanis, confused about what is going on, gets up slowly as he notice that they are not on Aiur.
"This planet, it reminds me of the Terrans' main homeworld, but at the same time, not like their homeworld."Artanis says.
It takes Artanis a short time to notice that not all their forces are here. He tries to get into contact with Vorazun Alarak and Talandar , but with no luck what so ever.
"So, what are your commands Hierarch?" Selendis asked Artanis.
"First, we find our friends, then we must find out what this planet is and what this planet has to offer,".
So this is my revamped ch.1 of my story. Just in cast I do not own any of the content in this story. I will work on ch.2 when I have the right amount of facts about RWBY vol.3. Until then I will see you next time.
