The Untouchable
Genre: Romance/Drama
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own any of the characters or storyline from 'The Fast and the Furious"
Rating: R
Description: Jay is a hitman who moved to LA. He was hired to take out a man named Edwin. There he met Alexia, the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. But she belongs to Dominic Toretto. Will he be distracted by her beauty, or will he finish the job regardless of his feelings?
Intro Jays POV: From the second I stepped off the plane I knew this was the place for me. LA, the place where the action is. I looked at the paper in my hand and read the name and address on it. Edwin Smith: 234 Welsh St. Los Angeles, CA. I got in this souped up car that I had bought for this particular job and drove to a motel close to where the "mark" lived. I found one just 2 streets away and put all my stuff in the room. I got on the phone and dialed the number on the top of the paper: "Hello?" "I'm in LA near the address you gave me" I said "There's a race tonite at the warehouse in a remote section of LA, I want you to be there to study him. I'll call you when I want the job done. Did you buy a race car?" "Yeah I did" I replied, thinking how much I spent on it. "Well it starts around 9:30 so get there on time. I sent you the picture of him so you'll have no problems finding him. Oh, and Jay?" "Yeah?" "Don't let any distractions get in you way. You don't want to put this contract in any danger." "I'm a pro, I don't need anyone's advice on how to do MY job" I said coldly "I'll call you when I think it's time. But don't fuck this up." "Yeah whatever" I said pressing "end" on my cell phone. After I hung up on him, I took a shower. The hours seemed to pass by really quickly, and when I looked at the clock it read 9:15. I grabbed my keys got in my car, and sped of into the night.
I immediately knew I was in the right place when I saw hundreds of nice looking sporting cars. I pulled into an empty spot and parked. I got out of my car and looked around amazed at all the people here. I turned around to see a Hispanic guy walking up to my car.
Hector's POV:
As I was talking to some girls, I see this fine looking car pull into the spot across from me. I see this medium sized muscular looking guy get out of the car and look around like he'd never been there before. I decided to see who he was and see what was under that hood (of his car of course).
Jays POV
The guy stopped right in front of me and said "Hey I'm Hector, and I can tell you're new here. Lookin for someone?" "I guess you can say that." I replied smiling. "Well.." He said before being cut off by a black guy walking over to us smiling. I recognized him as the guy in the picture. The mark. "Hey, I'm Edwin, you here for someone cuz it looks like you know shit about racing cars." "I guess it's that obvious. But yeah I'm just checkin it out. Who is everyone waiting for?" I asked curious. All of a sudden I heard loud music pumping through the crowds, and they all parted to make way for 5 nice looking cars. That must be who everyone's waiting for. "It's Dominic Toretto." Edwin said bringin me back to reality. Before I could answer him and Hector were already walking over to the cars. I followed curious of who could possibly be so important. The door opened and the biggest guy I had ever seen got out. He was so muscular and well- built that he put me and all the guys to shame. Other people got out of the cars and came to see him talking to Hector. I stood next to Hector when I heard the beeping of another car. Just then, a bangin Lexus came through and stopped next to Toretto. The door opened and a silky pair of legs came out following the most beautiful body. She was stunning in every way dressed only in a belly shirt and jeans. I stood there with my mouth open as Hector turned to look at me. "Who's that?" I said completely entranced with this mystery girl. "That's Dom's girl" Hector said smiling. "His girl?" I asked still in a trance " Yeah, and Edwin's cousin"
Genre: Romance/Drama
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own any of the characters or storyline from 'The Fast and the Furious"
Rating: R
Description: Jay is a hitman who moved to LA. He was hired to take out a man named Edwin. There he met Alexia, the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. But she belongs to Dominic Toretto. Will he be distracted by her beauty, or will he finish the job regardless of his feelings?
Intro Jays POV: From the second I stepped off the plane I knew this was the place for me. LA, the place where the action is. I looked at the paper in my hand and read the name and address on it. Edwin Smith: 234 Welsh St. Los Angeles, CA. I got in this souped up car that I had bought for this particular job and drove to a motel close to where the "mark" lived. I found one just 2 streets away and put all my stuff in the room. I got on the phone and dialed the number on the top of the paper: "Hello?" "I'm in LA near the address you gave me" I said "There's a race tonite at the warehouse in a remote section of LA, I want you to be there to study him. I'll call you when I want the job done. Did you buy a race car?" "Yeah I did" I replied, thinking how much I spent on it. "Well it starts around 9:30 so get there on time. I sent you the picture of him so you'll have no problems finding him. Oh, and Jay?" "Yeah?" "Don't let any distractions get in you way. You don't want to put this contract in any danger." "I'm a pro, I don't need anyone's advice on how to do MY job" I said coldly "I'll call you when I think it's time. But don't fuck this up." "Yeah whatever" I said pressing "end" on my cell phone. After I hung up on him, I took a shower. The hours seemed to pass by really quickly, and when I looked at the clock it read 9:15. I grabbed my keys got in my car, and sped of into the night.
I immediately knew I was in the right place when I saw hundreds of nice looking sporting cars. I pulled into an empty spot and parked. I got out of my car and looked around amazed at all the people here. I turned around to see a Hispanic guy walking up to my car.
Hector's POV:
As I was talking to some girls, I see this fine looking car pull into the spot across from me. I see this medium sized muscular looking guy get out of the car and look around like he'd never been there before. I decided to see who he was and see what was under that hood (of his car of course).
Jays POV
The guy stopped right in front of me and said "Hey I'm Hector, and I can tell you're new here. Lookin for someone?" "I guess you can say that." I replied smiling. "Well.." He said before being cut off by a black guy walking over to us smiling. I recognized him as the guy in the picture. The mark. "Hey, I'm Edwin, you here for someone cuz it looks like you know shit about racing cars." "I guess it's that obvious. But yeah I'm just checkin it out. Who is everyone waiting for?" I asked curious. All of a sudden I heard loud music pumping through the crowds, and they all parted to make way for 5 nice looking cars. That must be who everyone's waiting for. "It's Dominic Toretto." Edwin said bringin me back to reality. Before I could answer him and Hector were already walking over to the cars. I followed curious of who could possibly be so important. The door opened and the biggest guy I had ever seen got out. He was so muscular and well- built that he put me and all the guys to shame. Other people got out of the cars and came to see him talking to Hector. I stood next to Hector when I heard the beeping of another car. Just then, a bangin Lexus came through and stopped next to Toretto. The door opened and a silky pair of legs came out following the most beautiful body. She was stunning in every way dressed only in a belly shirt and jeans. I stood there with my mouth open as Hector turned to look at me. "Who's that?" I said completely entranced with this mystery girl. "That's Dom's girl" Hector said smiling. "His girl?" I asked still in a trance " Yeah, and Edwin's cousin"