This is my first chapter I'm putting in, so bear with me; I also want to
know if it's good, or bad, just give me some ideas, I need them.
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Harry was sitting on his favorite velvet cushioned chair with, spirals and designs that looked ancient. He was staring out on to Hogwarts ground where he spotted Cho Chang. She said something to her friend Marietta that made them laugh, and then walked away. He was half daydreaming, when Hermoine and Ron walked in through the porthole.
"Where've you been Harry?" asked Ron questioningly? Harry half jumped, to see them standing there and quickly moved his gaze elsewhere other than through the window. "Err... I... umm ...I... I...no where".
"Harry, you all right, mate, you look sick." Said Ron reproachfully.
"Yea I'm fine, I think I'll go to bed." Said Harry.
"What, at broad daylight" Hermoine said trying to act calm
"Hermoine he's gone mad." Said Ron, approving of it as he said it.
"NO he hasn't, he just needs some sleep, don't you, Harry." Hermoine asked thinking this explanation made more sense"
"Yea... I guess so... that's right!" he said more confidently.
"What do you mean, you guess?" Ron asked delightfully, thinking that he thumped Harry.
"I dunno." Harry said quickly. "I'm going to bed." He added. Which left Hermoine and Ron looking at where he was blankly before they realized what just happened.
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(Ron and Hermoine in the common room)
"It wasn't just a coincidence, you know." Hermoine said.
"Well Harry, wouldn't want us to do something he doesn't know about." Said Ron.
"We're trying to help him." Said Hermoine.
After a moment Ron added. "All right, so what are we going to do" he said with a guilty look of conscious.
"Okay, this is what were going to do, go look in the library and try finding a potion that will tell you what a persons feeling at the moment." Hermoine said.
"Well what if Harry didn't want us to know."" Ron added confidently.
"Well, Harry's keeping something from us and if we want to try and cure him, we should be doing the right thing." Hermoine said.
"Well I don't want to nose into his personal secrets." Ron said in tone that seemed to be full of caring.
"Don't be a wimp Ron" said Hermoine and looked as if she regretted it right after she had said it. "I'm sorry" she added at the look of great disgust in Ron's face.
"No need." He said and led them towards the library.
Ron was looking for more books, and Hermoine was reading them. "Nope, not in this one either, there just has to be some books that have the things we need." Hermoine said impatiently.
"Hey, this book might just do it" Said Ron, holding up a book called "Potions for emotions".
"No" said Hermoine "this doesn't have anything either"
"Can we just go to sleep, we can come back here tomorrow" Ron said hopefully.
"Just a..." she broke off at the gruesome face Ron was giving her, and added, "Fine, we'll just have to come back tomorrow" she said weekly.
At these words Ron looked as if, all the pain in the world was gone.
Harry was sitting on his favorite velvet cushioned chair with, spirals and designs that looked ancient. He was staring out on to Hogwarts ground where he spotted Cho Chang. She said something to her friend Marietta that made them laugh, and then walked away. He was half daydreaming, when Hermoine and Ron walked in through the porthole.
"Where've you been Harry?" asked Ron questioningly? Harry half jumped, to see them standing there and quickly moved his gaze elsewhere other than through the window. "Err... I... umm ...I... I...no where".
"Harry, you all right, mate, you look sick." Said Ron reproachfully.
"Yea I'm fine, I think I'll go to bed." Said Harry.
"What, at broad daylight" Hermoine said trying to act calm
"Hermoine he's gone mad." Said Ron, approving of it as he said it.
"NO he hasn't, he just needs some sleep, don't you, Harry." Hermoine asked thinking this explanation made more sense"
"Yea... I guess so... that's right!" he said more confidently.
"What do you mean, you guess?" Ron asked delightfully, thinking that he thumped Harry.
"I dunno." Harry said quickly. "I'm going to bed." He added. Which left Hermoine and Ron looking at where he was blankly before they realized what just happened.
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(Ron and Hermoine in the common room)
"It wasn't just a coincidence, you know." Hermoine said.
"Well Harry, wouldn't want us to do something he doesn't know about." Said Ron.
"We're trying to help him." Said Hermoine.
After a moment Ron added. "All right, so what are we going to do" he said with a guilty look of conscious.
"Okay, this is what were going to do, go look in the library and try finding a potion that will tell you what a persons feeling at the moment." Hermoine said.
"Well what if Harry didn't want us to know."" Ron added confidently.
"Well, Harry's keeping something from us and if we want to try and cure him, we should be doing the right thing." Hermoine said.
"Well I don't want to nose into his personal secrets." Ron said in tone that seemed to be full of caring.
"Don't be a wimp Ron" said Hermoine and looked as if she regretted it right after she had said it. "I'm sorry" she added at the look of great disgust in Ron's face.
"No need." He said and led them towards the library.
Ron was looking for more books, and Hermoine was reading them. "Nope, not in this one either, there just has to be some books that have the things we need." Hermoine said impatiently.
"Hey, this book might just do it" Said Ron, holding up a book called "Potions for emotions".
"No" said Hermoine "this doesn't have anything either"
"Can we just go to sleep, we can come back here tomorrow" Ron said hopefully.
"Just a..." she broke off at the gruesome face Ron was giving her, and added, "Fine, we'll just have to come back tomorrow" she said weekly.
At these words Ron looked as if, all the pain in the world was gone.