Mater Cheef, now with Xyron, leave moon of Trandor in spaceship Commander send hologran that say condiment attacking close Cheef and Xyron decide to fight They get there Xyron shoot like accuracy He take flame througher and shoot condiment Theys set on fire and screem "OH NOES" Two broots grab sheeld grenade and make a bubble around them Cheef grabs warthog and drive into them SPLATTER Xyron say "Ouch That hurted" They see two of dem big nasties with green light guns They knows to shoot in pink of back Cheef distract Xyron run around to shoot for accuracy Xyron hits first but misses on second This angers creeture and he shoot Xyron Cheef yells "NO" n meelys the condiment Xyron injur real bad Xyron tells Cheef to tell wife hes love him Xyron die and Cheef now alone again New guy name Trakor enters and calm down Trakor tell that he fights condiment and will help Sparton excepts offer and they leave Xyron's body disapper as most Cortana upset over Xyron and Arbiter death She help tell Cheef to fight in harder for life Cheef and Trakor take off for Myomasu a star glaxy Cheef go to fight big boss name Frankor When arrive Frakor laugh and tell him that Trakor be bad and Trakor shoot the Cheef Cheef out of sheeld and takes sniper make two quick shot Trakor and Frakor on the floor He should have known for name Cheef learn lesson and return to base Sargunt angry for close and Xyron He just joke though Credits roll
Thanks My second story and getting better I am sending in for publish
Positive review welcome
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