Since I was very unsatisfied with the ending of Divergent I have re-writen it. The next chapter will be in the POV of Nat. Tris's and Tobias's daughter (Reason for name will be explained in next chapter).
POV:Tris
This time I know it's my mothers hand, drawing me into her arms.
And I glady go into her embrace.
The next time I open my eyes I see Tobias standing over me, as well as Will and Christina. They all looked extremely worried.
"Wh-where am I? What happened? Did it work? Did we beat the Erudite?" I asked talking with lighting fast speed. Tobias looked relived to see me talking.
"Your at Dauntless House for the Hurt. We were able to revive you after your lungs filled with to much of the Death Serum. Yes it worked. And yes, there is no more Eruidite. Except for Cara. But she's Dauntless now." He answered. I stared into his eyes, He stared back. I can't wait for life to go back to normal. To live in his appartment together. To just be together without hiding it.
Christina and Will just stared at us. They still didn't know we were together. "Umm. So, me and Will are just going to get some food. Yeah so, okay." Christina said as she and Will walked out.
"Do they know when I'll be getting out uf this bed?" I asked Tobais.
"They said as soon as your family says you can. Since you don't have ay left, I'm in charge." He said with a smirk.
"Okay. So let's go. I'm fine." I said eager to get out of this stiff bed.
"No way. Your not getting out of this bed till your acctually healed." He said his smirk now vanished.
"Come on. I am. Really." I say trying to presuae him.
"Tris. No I can't risk almost losing you again. Your staying in this bed until we know your in stable condition." He said sternly. Why did he have to care so much I'll probobly be in this bed for the rest of my life.
I knew there was no way to change his mind so I tried making small talk. "I didn't know Dauntless had a hospital." I say to him changing the subject.
"They used to but they closed it down once Eric took charge. Now that there is no leader a lot of things have changed." He said with a hint of happiness in his voice.
"So what happened to the factions?" I asked worried " Is there even a place for anyone to live?"
"We changed things up so the factions are more like neighborhoods. No more Choosing Ceremony, No more differnce. Once we told everyone what was really going on they all helped clean up the city so now we live just as they would outside the fence." He answered.
"So there is still the Eruidte headquaters it's just not their headquarters anymore?"I asked suddenly confused.
"No that was the one building we burned down." He replied with a hardness to his voice. "We burned down all of Eruidite." He looked at me and I looked back at him. There was nothing but silence between us for a moment. When he finaly broke the silence he said "You need to rest I'll be here with you don't worry just close your eyes and go back to sleep."With those words I fell back into sleep knowing he'll be watching over me while I do.
Thanks for reading I'll have the next chapter up ASAP. Also this is my first fanfic so critaizm would help but please be nice about it. Thank You!
