Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.
I've decided to put in a chapter. Tell me what you think. This will be short the chapter get longer I promise. Naruto wont come in till chapter two. It will make sense later how all this relates.
I will have grammar mistakes. Please forgive them.
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There is a building that stands on a gray street, with gray walls, and a conveniently gray sky in the backdrop. With all these qualities working together you would think that the building would be spooky and hard to walk by, especially at night. You would be right, for you are a smart person, and as a smart person you would instinctively not go near this gray building at night.
One boy though is not as smart as you are, and as he's walking in front of this gray building, he stops and starts toward the front door, no he is not very smart at all. This boys name is Josh Turner, the one person in town that would not be smart enough to stay away from this gray building. For Josh Turner is a curious boy by nature and his grades are just below average.
As Josh is walking towards this gray building, he dose not know that inside this gray building is not friendly little mice or hideous but harmless roaches. No, what lies inside this building will kill little curious Josh Turner at the age of ten. Later on the police will find his body mangled and shredded by the bay bridge and his family will weep for years to come. All because Josh Turner was not a smart boy.
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