So this is my first fanfic EVER! Yay(sorry if it sucks)! If I made any mistakes please tell me! Any and all comments would be loved, good or bad.
Disclaimer: Veronica Roth owns four, Erik, Christine, and any future characters I include from her book, she also owns the settings and what this was based off of, Divergent 3
Chapter 1
"See ya tomorrow" I yell through the large almost empty apartment in which I hope is the voice I normally use. Judging by his response, I bet it was.
"See ya" he yells back, I hear something fall then laugh to myself. He's probably eating his friends out of house and home. He is perfection, and I wonder how I managed to entice him, it's definitely not my looks or my personality or um, anything about me. I'm going to have to ask him what he see's in me at their next candor or dauntless game.
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"Soooooo Evie!?" Addison practically shouts through the cell phone, she's always been one for over excitement.
"Soooooo Add!?" I shout back, mimicking her perfectly. I smile to my self. My goal is to be able to mimick everyone I know, so far I can mimick Addison, and Addison only. Probably because I hear he nagging voice all day long, whether I like it or not.
"Mmmmm, sooooooo how was Dison" she says elongating his name, taunting me without knowing it., I can hear the mischievous grin grow on her smug face through the line. Ugh, this again. She will never leave me alone about it, she has literally brought it up in every conversation since I told her I liked him. He is a years older than me, plus he thinks of me as more of a sister than anything else. Honestly, it's no big deal.
"Idk, you'd have to ask him yourself" I say with a shrug hoping she doesn't sound the desperate tone in my voice. I know he's doing good for a fact, but she insists on asking me how he's doing after I
"Nope, you can ask him tonight, he and his friends are throwing a party at their apartment tonight and we'll be playing candor or dauntless, and your going, even if I have to drag you kicking and screaming, and I'm sure that would attract Disons attention perfectly" she aggrivates me, but's out of breath towards the end. Mental note, she has a good point, and I do want to go, I just don't want anyone to know I want to go.
"Fine" I say trying to sound exasperated
"But...oh, OKAY! We need to go shopping though, so meet me at the chasm." with that she hangs up, I sigh. No turning back now.
What have I gotten myself into this time I mutter under my breath accentuating "have". She's probably gonna make me look like a girly girl, or make me wear a strapless dress. Something along those lines, she's always looking for something girly I will wear, so far, nothing.
During previous shopping trips we have gone on she gets lingerie and black sparkly shit while I sit there looking like a goof. I decide against that for this trip, I WILL participate this time I promise myself. I look in the mirror and give a snort to the person looking back at me knowing that will never happen. Never.
Dauntless is great and all but at points I look back on my decision to transfer from Amity, I didn't do to well there but still, Faction before blood, no turning back on that decision. Anyways I'm through initiation which I proudly got 4th in all. I was better with the physical and mental part that at them combined, plus I have9 fears so it didn't suck to much. Probably a reason for the awesomeness was that I am Divergent. I know it's excepted now but I still can't tell anyone, they still don't understand it.
Sighing unhappily I snap back to reality. I grab my bag, it's not really a bag, more of a pouch. Slip my sweatshirt on, the one with my name embossed on it in neon green, then lace up my new camo combat boots. I brush my brown and dark green hair back into a neat french braid, a skill my mother taught me. Could my favorite color be more obvious? I glance at the clock, 5 till 3, put on a convincing frown and headed down to the chasm, locking my door behind me. I was convinced this was going to be no fun. But thought, hey Addison, feel free to prove me wrong.
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On my way down, I ran into Evil Erik, a nickname we gave him during initiation. His piercings give me the creeps and apparently I'm not the only one who thinks it. I know because he glares at me and mutter barley audible, "one more word about my new piercing and somebody is gonna get hurt" I just nod with a grimace on my face while I continue walking.
That dude, he should not be allowed out of his house let alone to train initiates, seriously. I heard last year he made a condor girl named Christina hang from the railing over the chasm. Has he ever heard of being light heart-ed? Or a shower! Damn he smelled, and his hair was so greasy you could literally see the nasty grease dripping from his "luscious" locks of hair. More like dread locks of hair. Eyuck.
After that encounter I just keep my head down as I walk over to the chasm. I start day dreaming and look up just in time to see Dison walking towards me. He waves. My heart starts pumping, I hold my breath, and do a three sixty to make sure it was really me he was waving to. He and I are the only ones here right now,.
Addison's probably still applying makeup, Mental note, I need to kill her next time I see her. She probaby planned this.
Dison see's me stop in my tracks and laughs at my reaction, which in turn makes me blush wildly. I just stand there while he laughs even harder at me blushing. It takes him a few minutes to regain his original composure and my head starts pounding. Wait, I bite my tongue and wince, making sure to not react enough for him to notice but enough for me to realize I'm not day dreaming anymore. He stops short in front of me and that's when my heart starts beating rapidly. I'm convinced I'm going to die of a heart attack.
"Are you going to Four an I's party tonight?" he asks quizzically, I'm still not breathing "uhhhh, never mind, I'll see you tonight, or not, BYE" he turns and starts muttering to himself about stupid this or that and then disappears around the same corner Addison just rounded, she tries to suppress her grin at my face but epically fails. Breaking down into a giggling fit, she walks over to me grabs my arm and yells something I cant quite make out.
It might be because of the fact I am practically being dragged through the pit that everyone stops and stares. Or it could just be that we are super attractive, I'm going to guess it's the first though, just to be safe.
Thank you for reading, if you liked say sooo, if you didn't like it, then keep it to yourself! XD no you can tell me if you didn't like it, I need some truth or dare questions, don't worry it will be included in the next chapter and so will most of the characters from the book. If you couldn't tell Addison is a mini Christina and Evie, you probably didn't notice, is me. Just FYI Evie is short for Eveangaline. please comment or whatever, tell me what you want, give me guide lines! Thanks BYE!