A/N: *sighs* Hello once again the great world of Fanfiction~! I am back after to me what seemed like forever! But while I was away I have done some DRASTIC changes to the whole story the way the characters act and certain sections I have edited. But I will not get into too much detail and you all will be glad to know I have written up to Part 2 of the story it's just a matter of typing it!
Very OOC characters just to warn you for now
Disclaim: No nakey characters in manga so no mine.
Anyway!
How about I start ne?
"Talking"
"Thinking"
*Edited*
Part One:
Chapter 1: Him
He was sitting on the closet rock he could find without being see, he flicked his sunset tail in excitement.
"Come on" Kiba said pulling on the end of his fin slightly "Your mom is going to skin our fins if we aren't home Young Prince"
Naruto playfully glared at his best friend "Didn't I say for you to just call me Naruto?" The prince looked back towards the huge wave his crush rode at the moment. His surfer. His Raven surfer…yes…he liked that. "Mine..." he mumbled longingly
Kiba sighed "Yes, Young Pr-"
Naruto looked over
"Naruto" the young boy caught himself "We have to go before something happens"
"Go ahead; I will be right down..."
The young man stared at him before sighing once again "Fine but if your mom kills you, it's not my fault." Kiba arched his back and dove under the choppy waves his white and red fin flashing once before it disappeared under the black water.
Naruto, being a merman, highly resembled a woman. He had shoulder length blonde hair with specs of red blown throughout. The women in his underwater village, didn't cut their hair until their first born child.
His skin was a luscious golden tan color; he had a slim body but strong arms. His tail…his tail was as if it was the sunset its self. A beautiful array of colors, reds, oranges, and yellows all mixing into one. But! As you know his village isn't of the particular 'norm' per say. An example would be the royal blood line, which both men and women could bear children. They, being men, harbor the inner workings of females. Also as of becoming human, it only occurred on the new moon of each month. It was only the royals. When the time came for his beloved family to rise to the surface poor Naruto would stay below. He wasn't worried; he knew that he would never be able to change, not without help at least.
When his dear older brother disappeared he had stopped changing into a human, so when his family would be enjoying the warm sun on their skin, the golden sand on their legs Naruto would be in his room thinking and wishing. His changing had stopped when he was a mere five years old, "such a shame to see a beauty go to waste" he was told once.
Stealing one last glance at his raven surfer as he hung ten, Naruto dove under the crashing waves. Down, down, down he descended until he reached a rock formation in the shape of an arch. His home. This to him didn't feel like a home at all. To…put it nicely, the villagers didn't take to kindly to the poor boy. They blamed him for the disappeance of his older brother he didn't even remember that much, for the food shortages in the winter. For everything really. So instead of taking the main way to the palace he rook the back way. Where every day he learned swordsmanship with his teacher, Kakashi-sensei, believe it or not he was late almost every day. And not by a few minutes, by hours. His usual excuse "I had to save a cat from a tree..."
Opening a small black gate he swam into the garden where he would most likely go unnoticed. But as you have it some people in the town did love the boy and would show up unexpectedly from time to time. Like Jiraiya, the town perv.
"Hey! Bishie-chan!" Pervy-sensei called
Naruto came to a halt "Uncle?!"He turned around and found himself in a big bear hug.
"How are you Kiddo?" The white sannin said ruffling the boy's hair "Keeping out of trouble I presume?"
Naruto looked down "Weeelll I wouldn't say "Keeping out of trouble"" He gave a light hearted laugh as a worried woman burst through the door he was going to enter.
"Naru-chan!" she glomped him "Where in Kami-Sama have you been?"
He tried prying her off, her short red hair flowing as the water was disrupted. "Mom really I was gone for two hours"
"Two hours too long!" her sadness turned to anger quickly just as her face turned as bright as her hair "Where in the hell were you?" the woman growled out
"Only…near the surface" he looked up seeing the sun hit the surface of the glistening water
"Go" she turned away "Go to your room"
He started for the door "Yes mother, Bye Uncle"
"Goodbye Bishie-Chan" he smiled and waved happily
"And as for you-"his mother continued with the pervert.
Naruto reached for the door and quickly pulled it open only to find his father on the other side
"Naruto…" the man said coldly
"Father" was the quick response from the boy as he passed by
"Minato can I have a word with you?" was what he heard after his mother had banished the pervert before the door had sealed out the rest of the conversation.
"I just wish that I could just be a normal merman" Naruto sighed as he gently floated down onto his bed "Why?"
-Flashback/Dream Sequence-
"Toss the ball Naru!" an older boy called
"Onii-tan!" a small five year old boy ran over to him. It was a New Moon
"Give me a hug!" he picked up the blonde boy just as he wrapped his small arm around his neck
"Onii-tan?" the boy pulled back slightly looking at the man who for some reason had a blurry face "Where are we?"
He gave a low grumble, which must have been a laugh "It is a magical place, called land, where humans wander about"
"Humans?" he cocked his head to the side cutely
"Yes, humans they-"he was interrupted by another man who was walking towards them carrying another small boy
"Hey! Ky-"
-End-
"-aru-chan?" a voice whispered into his ear "Naruto wake up~!" His blue eyes snapped open to see colorless ones looking down at him
"Neji?" Naruto questioned sitting up slightly "How did you get in here?"
"Open window" the red head answered pulling him into a hug "You really should close that window if you are going to sleep; some pervert is going to come in here one day"
Naruto laughed and hugged him back "You mean you Gaara?"
Gaara bashed the boy on the head lightly
"Let's go!" Neji said going back to the open window
"Where?" the blonde was now up and behind Gaara
"For an all Prince's night at Oro-chichi's now hurry it up!"Gaara grabbed on to his hand and pulled him through the window that would change his life forever.
A/N: Ok! Finished!
Quick question for all you other Fan Fic writers~
Have you ever written something that is about 6 or 7 pages long in Word and it looks really short on the site?
I hate that! It makes me feel like I could have written more haha! Well please tell me all what you think of the new and greatly improved "Love that Came from the Sea".
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Rachelle
