I have been rereading the stories that I have already written but haven't posted yet (I write them out by hand before I post them online) I am not liking the way they are and "The Five Donnellys" was one of them. Thank god for the age of technology and nothing, technically, has to stay the way it is.
Sorry to anyone who didn't get a chance to read the story as originally posted, but after I went back and reread it I was not happy with it and I am the author so if I don't like it then I get to change it.