Notice

I have been thinking about it and something has been bugging me for a while. This story is … problematic; at least from my point of view. I realize now that I have made a few errors on my part.

First and foremost, the opening of the story is hastily done. I jumped head-first into a type of story that contradicts with what Evangelion is at its core. It isn't something you can go into without thinking more than I had. You need to know how characters would react in situations and how they would react to multiple kinds of people.

Secondly, Alexander came off stronger than I intended. He's good, I'll say that and that's not going to change. Is he the best? No, and he probably won't end up being the best. He won't be able to do anything and everything with extreme skill and I intend for it to stay like that.

Thirdly, Alexander appeared to have a flatter personality than intended. I'll admit that, for the situation and time-frame. I wouldn't have changed a thing. I don't intend for you to know everything about him off the bat and if you did you would have eventually found Alexander bland and uninteresting. However I should have made Alexander personality more unique and given you something to allow some empathy or connection to be made.

Finally, it's dull. I fact, I would go so far as to say the first chapter was as boring as hell. No action to make important mention, and no hints toward later action was a great mistake.

Now, on to my reviewers. I thank you for the reviews and the advice. Your opinions were refreshing and allowed me some insight looking from the outside in.

Sonnes-Loco77: I honestly am not a die-hard fanatic of any pairing in the EVAverse so I guess I can only say to each his own.

Brassmonki: Thank you for your advice and criticism and I hope that I can eventually see you reviewing again.

Saberstorm: It will be interesting but not with the way I was writing it.

Scrin and steel talons rule: Good, you need to be scared sometimes. And for the millionth time, It's pronounced HA-SAY-OH.

: I guess I should thank you, that review was what I needed to hear if I wanted this story to go anywhere, but I still think that your delivery was a bit harsh. Not to mention that the inability to contact you after I read your review has severely affected my opinion of you. From my point of view, you seem more than willing to dish out criticism to others but are afraid of hearing your own faults even if they need to be known. Still, thank you and I hope you see this. (Also what the hell made you think that this was a SI?)

Now, for a final announcement. I am putting this story on hiatus until I feel I am ready to write it. Hopefully it won't be too long until then, but if it is, oh well. Shit happens.

To anyone who actually enjoyed the story I apologize, and to those who hated it, why are you reading this?