As from your reviews I have seen that I have made many mistakes and I want to say one thing I know it is not easy to read because it is in a script mode and many of you are confused but this is my first story and I wanted to use this so I could get better in writing I also want to say I'm not a good writer I wanted to write this because this is how I felt it should of went and I'll try to make it better. I just got or at least I think I got a beta reader and he or she is going to help with the grammar so hopefully it will get better and now here is the first chapter with all of the beta readers help on it thanks kaku san

Ch 1
The Boy That was Called Naruto

It was the start of a beautiful day in the village named Konoha. The people were waking up to start the day. Everything was going as it usually did, but for some reason we are about to find out what the village hidden in leaves were hiding for the last ten years.

You see, there is a little boy named Naruto who was sleeping in his apartment, but something strange was about to change how he sees things. The little boy his name is Naruto Uzumaki. He is ten and lives alone in an apartment and the whole village hates his guts, but for some strange reason he doesn't even know why. He has three whisker marks on each cheek and his skin looks like it has been kissed by the sun he has a little baby fat left on his face and all for all a kawaii little boy.

Well, as I said before, it was a start of a beautiful day in Konoha and said boy I was talking about earlier is asleep, but something was about to come and change that. An anbu member called the Wolf was going to wake him up so that he could see the hokage.
The little boy was very hard to even wake up eventually the anbu member had to get a bucket filled with water so that the blond gaki would wake up.

"WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT FOR?" The ten year old yells.

"Hokage-sama has summoned you, so, you need to hurry to the office he has something important to talk to you about." The Anbu member informed the blond.

"What does the old man want?" Naruto asks.

"I don't know, but you only have fifteen minutes to get there so, I suggest you don't waste them talking to me."

"What!" Naruto exclaims. "Why didn't you tell me before you Teme."

Naruto gets dressed in a record time of ten seconds and runs out the door while hurridly putting his goggles on his head

"Maybe I should of told him earlier so he wouldn't be rushing. Oh well, back to my book now lets see where was I-oh, that's right the part where emmi blah blah blah"

Ten minutes later

A really tired naruto falls face down on the floor of the Hokage's office. He slowly gets up and walks tiredly to the person who was about to tell him something important.

"What do you want old man?" Naruto asked.

"Well," Sarutobi the Hokage began. "you see, now that you are the age of ten I have something important to discuss with you and I just want you to listen, then you can scream all you want."

Naruto sighed, "Fine I'm listening old man."

"Naruto, I know that you see the hatred in the villagers eyes and the reason is because . . . on your birthday ten years ago a demon named kyubbi-well, he attacked the village and since he was a demon the fourth wasn't able to kill him so, he had to seal the demon into a baby. Can you guess who that baby was?"

"M-m-me?" Naruto stuttered.

"That is correct. Also, the Yondame was your father."

"My f-father?"

"There is one more thing."

"What is that?" Naruto asked.

"You are a girl."

Naruto fell sideways out of the chair in a faint

"Well, she took it better than I thought she would." Sarutobi muttered.

Again thank you kaku-san I hope this will continue on