Hello, noble readers, this is my first story, so feedback is appreciated, if I get feedback, I write more often, it's a win win situation! This is a SYOT so, submit tributes iin the review area.
Anyway, before I start, I thought I might give you a taste of how I write.
The scream could be heard from all sides of the arena, nobody missed it. A cannon followed, just another victim of the careers. "Top 8", Canis thought, somewhat proud of his kill. Being brought up in a career district, he was highly advantaged. Canis had been training for this since the age of 8, and he was prepared to win. Little did he, or the rest of the 4 remaining careers know that they were being watched.
She came out of nowhere, throwing axes and hacking at flesh, showing no mercy. Her eyes twinkled with nothing but hatred; this was her ticket to victory. The careers stood no chance against the girl from 5's utter skill with those axes, she had taken them by surprise.
One last cannon signalled that the last of the careers was dead.
"4 down, 3 to go" she muttered, as she walked away from the scene, a smile on her blood stained face.
So there you go! Hope you liked it.
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