ok this is my first story and I would like to become better at it so I'm not expecting to get good reviews my first try but I appreciate all reviews good and bad.

deep in the hundred acer wood on a foggy and misty day Christopher Robin and all his so called friends were at poohs house out in his backyard trying to play baseball. The problem was that Christopher Robin thought that they we're playing football and when ever it was his turn to bat he instead of hitting the ball with the bat tried to catch it and in return got beamed by the ball several times. Pooh and the others tried to tell him that they we're playing baseball but he just said "no no no we are playing football only peebrains such as your selfs would confuse football with baseball!" so they after several attemps to trie and tell him gave up and watched him trie to catch the ball and the ball hitting him.The other problem was that the ground was wet and it wasfoggy and misty.Christopher Robin finaly stoped after he got hit by the 50th or 60th ball. He had black and blue marks all over him from the balls. So they all went inside the house and Rabbit made them some hot chocolate and got an icepack for Chritopher Robin.

Then a little while later they could hear a truck coming. It stoped by the mail box and droped something in it then drove away.

The gang quickly ran to the mailbox as Christopher Robin pushed them out of the way and ran head first into the mail box. He looked into the mailbox there was a letter in it he tried to get his head out of the mail box then his friends arrived and even though they really didn't want to they helped him get his head unstuck. They finaly got his head out and looked in the mailbox and opened the letter that was inside it.

Itwas of course addressed to Pooh being his house and all.

Then all of them full ofcuriosity gathered around Pooh. Then he reached inside the envolope and pulled out OneMillion dollars!

All of them stood staring at the envolope in shock. Who could have sent him one million dollars! Then Pooh remembered that he had enterd a contest to win one million dollars a while back.

Pooh full of joy asked "what is it?"

Rabbit and Christopher Robins gaws bothe droped and said at the same time "What do you mean Pooh! this is money and a lot of money how could you not know what it is!Pooh do you know what this means? it means that you are rich!"

Then Pooh said "I am? oh that's wonderfull! but what does rich mean?"

Rabbit and Christopher Robin bothe shaking thier heads said "It means that you can buy a lot of stuff with that money!" Is that a good thing?" Pooh anwsered."YES DON'T YOU KNOW ANYTHING!" Some times I think I know very little" He anwsered.

"well that money probabley has the wrong address because how could a peebrain like Pooh win that much money? Yes I think that money really belongs to...ME!"

Then he snached the money and envolope out of Poohs hands and jumped up and down shouting "I'm rich! I'm rich! I'm rich!" And then the wind picked up and Christopher Robin lost his grip on the envolope and the wind blew it away and landed into the river.

"YOU IDIOT!" they all shouted. "oops I guess it slipped?"

POW! Rabbit punched him right in the eye.He fell to the ground and woke up a few minutes later.

"How dare you! you...you...YOU PEEBRAIN!"

"Oh I'm the PEEBRAIN! Well who grabbed the money even though it didn't belong to him and shouted I'm rich I'm rich! And who dropped the million dollars and let the wind take it ! AND not only that but the money is now floating down stream! And you are calling me a PEEBRAIN!" Rabbit said

"ahh yeah YES I AM!"

POW! Rabbit knocked him out cold.

Ok that's it. I have another idea for the next chapter but I would like to know if I should continue it so PLEASE R&R!

I appreciate anyone who reviews my story even if my story sucked.