I went back and read my old version of brother hood of the mountain and found that it was highly flawed so I have decided to re wright it.

Chapter 1

Tommy's pov

I woke to find my alarm clock screaming at me and demanding that I wake up.

I reached to turn it off but in my dizzy and half asleep state I couldn't for the life of me find the off switch.

I settled for knocking it off the bedside table onto the ground witch sent the batteries flying out in all directions.

I nearly fell out of bed and clumsily walked along the hall and down the stairs to the kitchen.

Dill sat on the kitchen bench trying to cook bacon with a heat lamp.

"Morning sunshine!" He said with a touch of sarcasm.

"What are you doing?" I said.

"I am cooking bacon."

"With a heat lamp?"

"Yep"

"Why?"

"To break up the everyday montane of cooking bacon with a frypan."

"Only you Dill would do something like that."

"Well what are you having and you can't have any bacon because I only got enough for me and I have been doing this since 4 in the morning so I cant put more on now."

I looked at the clock, it was 8 am.

"You have been doing this for 4 hours?"

"Yep"

"I'll just have toast."

A little while later.

Dill had finally finished his bacon but by then everyone else had had breakfast so it was just him.

Chuckey, Kimi, Phil and Lil turned up around 10.

We pilled our suitcases and bags in the car as best we could but it still appeared like we had thrown them in.

Me, Chuckey and Phil piled into my room to find some of the essential stuff for long car drives.

"Comics." Chuckey said while putting a whole load of comics in my backpack.

"3DS, PlayStation vita, iPod and iPad." Said Phil putting all of this in the bag.

The list went on and on until we finally finished with my backpack almost too heavy to hold.

We found the girls talking to Dill while playing my latest game THE BANE OF THE WOLF.

You play as a wolf trying to survive from a group of hunters and you have to try to take them out one by one until there all dead.

"All ready?" Dad said coming up from the basement

"Yes chef!" Dill called out as he finished the last of his bacon.

"Alright then let's hit the road." Dad said heading out to the car.

"You guys go I'll go and get my video camera it should be charged by now." I said

Every one made their way to the car I sprinted up the stairs and into my room. The light was showing green on my camera. I grabbed it and the cord an ran back down stairs.

"Woof woof!" Barked spike from the kitchen.

I gave him a hug and a pat and joined Chuckey at the door.

"Why isn't your mum coming?" He said

"She's in Canada with Phil and Lil's mom, it's some kind of book tour or something like that, a book that they both love is set in Canada and they are visiting the towns its set in." I said as I closed the door behind us.

"But what about Spike?" He said as we opened the doors of the car and clambered into the back.

"Your parents are going to look after him for the 2 weeks were gone."

"Ooohhh" he said.

"Were are we staying? I know we are going to the snow but I don't know were." Phil said turning his head to look at us behind him

"We are going to the snow alpha lodge." Chuckey said

"I don't know where or what that is." Phil said still staring at Chuckey.

"It's the place where I got stuck up on the faze 3 mountain and had to go down it in the dark." Chuckey said slightly irritated that he had to recount the hole bad experience again.

"Oh that place, that's where we played that old game of ours, what was it called?" He said

"The brother hood of the mountain." Lil said from the front seat.

"That's the one!" Phil said reminiscing of the days past.

"We used to play a lot of games like that." Kimi said.

"I don't remember any of games like that." Dill said thinking as hard as he could.

"Well we don't need to play games any more we have a lot of adventures to do so we best get cracking." I said looking out of the window and already we were leaving civilisation behind and instead we were entering the land of mountains.

Hey guys thanks for reading and for those who read my old story thanks for sticking with, I hope to do around 40 chapters rather than 20 chapters. So what did you think please review!