this is my first fanfic i actually have it all typed up and ready to go

unlike the first two parts it quite action-y, so this is introducing you to the characters

that ive created in bioware fantastic universe.

also still working out some kinks be paitent...pls.

Elana Darcey; Born in London on April 22, 2158 into a wealthy family who later left london. From the busy mega-city to the english country side in Cheshire, with its beautiful gardens, vistas ands its national parks. they moved into a large mansion Elana had a wonderfull childhood she had everthing a young girl could want. However later on in her teen years Elana felt a void in her life. She would watch her Year older brother Elliott succeed in life not so much in his studies but he was very like-able among his peers and while he wasent favored by his parents mainly because he would rather be doing anything else rather than his school work which brought him and Elana closer because she constantly would have to help him at school wether it be studies or girls and somtimes getting out of trouble. Like most young girls in wealthy families she was spoiled and because of the void she felt she filled it with anything, she just didnt know what to do with herself and after high school when she left for college she fell into a bad crowd she stoped talking to her famliy and somtimes She would party for days on end, leaveing a string of "lovers" and friends behind her. Things were getting bad when she started using red sand which would make her meeger biotics go out of control. Eventually she was arrested for it and her parents gave her a choice; rehab or being cut off. She choose rehab and moved into a rehab center in london where she curently lives...

Weeks before Reaper invasion.

Elana woke up to a knock on her dorm room door.

"come in the doors open."

she moaned still trying to lift her self off the bed. As a broad shouldered Elliott Darcey entered the room, he walked toward the refrigerator almost imediatly, he started looking for something to eat and had been eating Allaince food for the past three months and he had finally got a surprising shore leave from Vancoover were he was stationed under Admiral Anderson and apart of Commander Shepards security detail.

"morning sister, Breakfast?" He said not looking away from the refrigerator.

"Please."

Elana said rubbing her eyes on her way to the island counter top. Elliott grabbed some eggs and peppers and put a pan on the stove before turning around to face his sister. They looked eyes and knid of just stood their akwardly until Elana said,

"a hug then?"

she raised her arms for an embrace.

"for the sister you never visit."

Elliott roled his eyes and gave her a hug.

"you know why i dont visit 'lana."

he said letting go,He walked over to the stove and started making breakfast.

"im positioned in Vancoover Canada so, not a lot of time to spend with the family."

Elana sat at the counter top. Still feeling a little groggy she looked at Elliott and said.

"I know, i know you and your alliance duties are to important to visit your barmy sister."

she said with a exsasperated and sarcastic tone she then proceeded to give him the look their mother would scold them with, the "im angry but i still love you" felt bad for her even though she kind of brought it upon herself he put the finished eggs on a plate then added salsa he found in the refridgerator.

"one of the other Leutenants calls this hovos rancher-os."

he said (as he completly butchered the spanish language and had no right to call peppers with salsa covered eggs Huevos rancheros but thats the British for ya).

He put it infront of Elana and poured her a glass of orange juice and one for himself as well.

"it's certainly different."

Elana said trying not to be insulting he did make it for her after all.

"eh it's better when James makes'm."

he walked over to the couch and turned on the T.V. and started flipping through the channels ocasionally sipping his drink.

"so..." Elana started.

"hows mum and dad."

she took a few more bites as Elliott started to speek.

"well their doing ok, honestly i havent seen them much, being a continent away."

She left the rest of her food on the counter and plopt down next to him on the sat their for a moment watching some random show quietly untill Elana spoke.

"so why are you here, really?" she looked at him.

he glanced at her then back toward the T.V.

"they gave me an extended shore leave, because by order of Admiral Anderson im to report to the MSV Normandy SR2 in six weeks."

he took a sip of his O.J. and continued.

"I don't know when i'll be back could be months or even a year maybe two."

Elana turned toward him sitting cross legged on the couch and asked.

"Two years? Elliott we-i barley see you now."

"i know but this is big and frustrating but its also important and a large honor the Normandy represents the best and brightest of humanity just being considered is a honor and i got officially transfered."

he stood and walked over to the window, it was one of those big picture windows and this being a high class rehabilitation center it had all luxurious furnishings and large room for the wealthier patients.

"yeah well Elliott it's also stupid. Shepard's in jail that could be you, you know."

she turned to face him still sitting on the couch.

"Well I also get a pretty good pay raise because i'm an officer and I need it."

"Why do you need the money? Caroline has a job and you two don't have any..."

he truned around and faced his sister as her face lit up and she jumped out of seet to give her brother another hug.

"You're going to be a bloody father! Of a real live baby! oh my gosh this means im an aunt! great just in time for thirty,Oh how far along is she?"

she let go of him as he just blurted out,

"two months."

then Elana happiness turned to frustration

"two months are you blumen jokeing? two months and you dont tell your sister who does that? oh this is so you."

Elliott just kind of stood their before sitting down while she was stareing at him with her hands raised.

"are you done?"

"for now"

she sat down next to him glaring a rather playfull yet annoyed glare she then let out a sigh.

"good because i snuck ya somthing real to drink."

he pulled out the bottle and set it on the coffee table and went an grabbed some glasses

he handed one to Elana and poured one for himself he raised his glass and said a quick toast.

"to liam-"

"you didnt tell me he was a boy either?" she shook her head "you arse."

she rolled her eyes and drank and Elloitt let out a sigh before drinking.

the two spent the rest of they day together Elliott went to a few of her classes even her red sand addicts group therapy. At the end of the day they hugged and said goodbye and he told her that on the last week they should all get together, the whole family and she agreed to come even though the last time she was with her parents they sent her to where she is now, and it was not a good family she loves her family and it will be good to show them that she's making good progress.

When Elliott left she felt sad allready that void that constantly tugs at her the same one that told her that her life had no worth or meaning she went to bed staring at the ceiling wishing to be rid of her "curse".The following weeks were buisness as usual for Elana she woke up at nine went to yoga at ten, she would then spend a good ten minutes in the sauna. After she would have lunch in the centers mess hall with her friends.

then she had a special biotic therapy session at one. Where she could learn to use her abilities without using a Biotic amp. It was one of her favorite things to do because it made her feel more in control of her abilities than when she used red sand. However "natural" human biotics were rare and tipically unimpresive but Elana was the only one in her class(class of five because of the rarity in humans) that could lift up to 60lbs(or 28kg). Which for a human to have this raw biotic talent is almost unherd of, most good human biotics need implants to focus their energy onto one object which Elana could do without one...barely. And she also liked the class because of the cute instructor Bryn James. Granted she thought that Bryn was a girls name but he's welsh so she let it go.

Then after BTS she got to relax for the rest of the day. She liked to swim in the pool,read, and sometimes her friends would get old movies and make fun of them. Her favorite one to laugh at was the 1980s terminator movies she thought the special affects were halarious. But when the day was done, the wrost thing was the lonliness she felt at the end of a day so she had trouble sleeping and would wind up stareing at the ceiling listening to music, thinking about all the people she hurt.

Like Anna her best friend until the incedint were Elana was tripping on so much red sand that she broke Annas' arm in two tearing it completely off from the elbow, fortunatly they were able to reattach it but she never spoke to Elana again and thats when her parents sent her to rehab.

Allthough Elana was luckier than most red sand users it can cause permanent neural scaring especially in people with amps fortunatly she just got the occasional head ache. She felt as though she had led a lack-luster life and red sand just made her feel so alive and strong but right now she felt week and powerless. For a few more weeks Elana continued her routine until friday when she got her free pass to see her family for the first time in months.

like i said it's hard to introduce OCs and make them interesting and likeable shit gets real when the reapers hit though so comment and tell me what you think of Ms. Darcey so far.