AN:
Okay so I'm sort of new to this and all but I would really appreciate the reviews just so I get an idea of what you guys think. I'm very open to criticism, believe me I'm not a bitch at all. Feel free to give me ideas they could really help. I have a plan for this story but I'm always willing to take a detour to please my readers. I am in much need of a BETA so please consider being mine, I need someone to help put all these crazy ideas in my head on paper or I guess this site. Okay so I wont take anymore of your time just read/review and let me know :)
Prologue:
BPOV
Shooting upright in my bed I could still feel the warmth that came over my body as his Peridot eyes looked into my soul, and the sweet velvet of his musical voice sent my entire body into flames. I never got any farther than HIM saying my name.
It was as if he knew just what to do to get under my skin. Why was this stranger affecting my so badly? Something just didn't feel right, this time it just felt too real like a part of me knew who it was but
I just couldn't put my finger on it. This had been going on for months and I just couldn't shake this feeling. As I stepped out of bed I knew there was no use in trying to go back to sleep. I decided a shower would help clear my mind but as I stood under the waterfall cascading over me all I could think about was my mystery man.
EPOV
My eyes shot open. he heart pounding a mile a minute . I swear that dream had to have been real this time. I could still feel her silky mahogany locks through my fingers and the burn of her lips on mine and hear the sensual way she said my name.
I looked around my bedroom trying to capture some sense of reality when my eyes suddenly focused on the time, 5am. There was no way I was going back to sleep anytime soon. As I made my way into the restroom I realized how different it felt this time.
It was always the same dream but something inside me told me this was different. I stepped under the steaming stream of water hoping to clear my head but all I could think about was my mystery girl.
AN:
So I hope you liked it, it took me quite awhile to actually decide oh how I wanted to do this. I tend to second guess myself a lot. So I'm already working on Chapter 1 and it's going pretty well so far I'm thinking depending on the response on this Chapter I may upload either Saturday or Sunday. Also depends on how soon I get finished at the moment I am editing and rewriting and writing and going crazy so be patient with me. I will definitely not be one of those authors that has you waiting for months unless something happens and with my life that'll probably be never. Well I'm off to continue writing!
3 Yeli