Okay, this is my first fanfic. It takes place during Eclipse. It's kinda weird.
Chapter 1
I was freezing. I didn't know it was possible for it get this cold. I had just woken up from a night of this cold. I wished Edward were here. I knew he would just make me colder but at least I would know for sure that he was safe.
I was sitting here when his family was risking their lives to save me. It didn't make sense. I should be there in the clearing doing what I could. I knew that wasn't much. Why was a clan of strong vampires trying to protect me, an insignificant human? I knew the odds were okay. The werewolves were also fighting.
I glanced over at Seth. He was still in his wolf form. I wished I could know what was happening in the fight as well. I wished I could know that Edward was safe.
Suddenly Seth jumped up. He started whining and barking.
I watched him in utter confusion. He was barking at the trees. Then I saw her. Victoria. She stepped out from the trees. She was not alone; a young male vampire followed her.
She smiled at me. I was too petrified to move. She turned to the other vampire.
"Kill the wolf."
Instantly, the vampire had attacked Seth. Seth fought back but soon the vampire had won.
I didn't even want to see Seth. He died because of me.
Both pairs of eyes turned to me. The male started towards me. Victoria stopped him.
"She's mine."
Where was Edward when I needed him?
Okay that was my first chapter. What did you think? Review! Please!