Hi!
This is my first ever fanfic and I'm really nervous about it. So please give me criticism. I need it!
This will have minimal romance and lots of friendship fluff .
Prologue: The hidden kingdom
Livia. The fourth elvish ring. Hidden to many. Unknown to all but a select few. It protects the hidden city of Amoreth, the home of the livian elves. A most discreet race that keeps to themselves, they are, in appearance, very similar to the Noldor or Sindar. In fact the only way to tell the difference is the streaks of an unusual color in their hair, which will only be attained when they perform a great sacrifice.
The king of these people was currently pacing up and down in his study waiting for news.
"Ada!" trilled a young elfling as she dashed in to the room.
The king smiled as he lifted her and spun her in a circle. The young one giggled. He sat on her chair and placed her on his knee.
"Bounce! Bounce!" she jumped up and down. He obliged and bounced her on his knee.
"Now why don't you be a good little princess and go play with Thenid."
"But ada!",she looked up at him, her green eyes pouting, "I am Thenid!"
The king sighed. He was never going to figure out which twin is which. "Do you know that Minuin is having her weapons training now? Why don't you pay her a visit?"
She grinned in delight, "Okay!"
She ran out of the room, her black hair flying behind her.
The next person to enter was a maid.
"Well?"Said the king impatiently.
She smiled widely," Aran nin, you have a beautiful baby girl!"