This is so much better than the Troyella stories wrote in the past, and I will tell you, I had a look back, and some time off, but I'm back now, and promise to make this a non Twilight story. It's not going to be a story, because of choppy, but it'll be a script instead, and as always, it will be look like most of my stories. I'm still learning how to make the stories and the plot better.