Fact No 1. : I don't own Final Fantasy
This is My first fic! please don't be too mean, but constructive critism is always welcome.
My story is based the lesson given to the children on the white seed ship (its on the opposite side of the ship from the cabin, the place where Elone jamp off).
If you missed it out like I did the first time I played FF8, or have forgotten it then here it is:
One day Hyne became lazy made tools, they were very clever tools and could create new tools. These tools were called Humans. Hyne decided they were becoming too plentiful so decided to destroy some of the young ones of the race. The humans became angry and attacked Hyne. He attacked them with magic but their numbers were too many for Hyne to kill them all. So the humans eventually won and in exchange for not killing him he said he would give them half his power.
So he chopped himself in half and gave one half to the humans. Then the humans started to fight among themselves for the power and eventually one clan arrose victorious. But they could not make the skin work and someone came along and told them the half was actually a trick of Hynes and it was only his skin. And thats where she finished.
Infuriating eh? so I decided to finish off the story bearing in mind I don't like this story and it's only a ledgend so I can change it a bit(or alot) :)
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The leader of the one remaining clan finally stood victorious infront of Hyne his sword resting on Hynes throat. The fighting had been intence with Hyne throwing many magic tricks at him but none were fatal.
It had been many generations since Hyne had rained down fire from the sky that had killed so many children. And it was his great-grandfather Grobmar who after emerging victorious had been given the useless skin which Hyne had said contained so much power. But now He, Zorblek now had within his grasp the amazing power that was contained within Hyne.
"You are cornered now, Oh mighty one" Zorblak hissed "It is time for you to fulfil your promise and give me half of your power" Hyne sighed
"Woe that this race is so violent. With your foolish wars and murderous ways I am loath to enturst you power. But as you wish, so shall be it." Hyne over Zorblaks armoured shoulder to the clan arranged behind him.
"With you lies the responsobility of keeping this power in check. And now. I shall make the best of a bad choice" Reaching out behind Zorblak, Hyne grabbed the tands of Zorblaks twin daughters, Vazra and Vizray, and pulled them to him. He released the girls hands then plunged them into his own stomach. His hands emerged carrying a black flame. He divided it between his hands and solemly gave one to each child.
"I divide half of my powers between you, use them wisely and when you die, for you will die, pass your half of the powers onto someone deserving. Do not let your heart be corrupted with the power I now give you."
Zorblak roared in rage and yelled out
"The power should be mine! Give it to me now!" But Hyne had already gone.
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Please Review. I'd like to make this story continue on to the present day, It would be a Squino, Quifer kind of thing with all the gang back together after the Ultimactia thing that is if you all like it. But I'll put up chapter 2 whatever kind of reviews I get :)
This is My first fic! please don't be too mean, but constructive critism is always welcome.
My story is based the lesson given to the children on the white seed ship (its on the opposite side of the ship from the cabin, the place where Elone jamp off).
If you missed it out like I did the first time I played FF8, or have forgotten it then here it is:
One day Hyne became lazy made tools, they were very clever tools and could create new tools. These tools were called Humans. Hyne decided they were becoming too plentiful so decided to destroy some of the young ones of the race. The humans became angry and attacked Hyne. He attacked them with magic but their numbers were too many for Hyne to kill them all. So the humans eventually won and in exchange for not killing him he said he would give them half his power.
So he chopped himself in half and gave one half to the humans. Then the humans started to fight among themselves for the power and eventually one clan arrose victorious. But they could not make the skin work and someone came along and told them the half was actually a trick of Hynes and it was only his skin. And thats where she finished.
Infuriating eh? so I decided to finish off the story bearing in mind I don't like this story and it's only a ledgend so I can change it a bit(or alot) :)
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The leader of the one remaining clan finally stood victorious infront of Hyne his sword resting on Hynes throat. The fighting had been intence with Hyne throwing many magic tricks at him but none were fatal.
It had been many generations since Hyne had rained down fire from the sky that had killed so many children. And it was his great-grandfather Grobmar who after emerging victorious had been given the useless skin which Hyne had said contained so much power. But now He, Zorblek now had within his grasp the amazing power that was contained within Hyne.
"You are cornered now, Oh mighty one" Zorblak hissed "It is time for you to fulfil your promise and give me half of your power" Hyne sighed
"Woe that this race is so violent. With your foolish wars and murderous ways I am loath to enturst you power. But as you wish, so shall be it." Hyne over Zorblaks armoured shoulder to the clan arranged behind him.
"With you lies the responsobility of keeping this power in check. And now. I shall make the best of a bad choice" Reaching out behind Zorblak, Hyne grabbed the tands of Zorblaks twin daughters, Vazra and Vizray, and pulled them to him. He released the girls hands then plunged them into his own stomach. His hands emerged carrying a black flame. He divided it between his hands and solemly gave one to each child.
"I divide half of my powers between you, use them wisely and when you die, for you will die, pass your half of the powers onto someone deserving. Do not let your heart be corrupted with the power I now give you."
Zorblak roared in rage and yelled out
"The power should be mine! Give it to me now!" But Hyne had already gone.
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Please Review. I'd like to make this story continue on to the present day, It would be a Squino, Quifer kind of thing with all the gang back together after the Ultimactia thing that is if you all like it. But I'll put up chapter 2 whatever kind of reviews I get :)