Hey guys! Anyways, second story, I'm still thinking about Cheated. So, this is going to be a full story where Tris survives getting shot by our good old friend (douchebag) David the Douche. Anyways, of characters seem OOC, please PM me and tell me what to do to improve it. Alright, thanks!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Divergent! Veronica Roth does.
I jam my fist down on the green button, feeling the pain intensify in my abdomen. I fall to the ground into a pool of my own warm, sticky blood. I clutch my hip, where the bullet hit me, and try to stem the flow of blood. There are so many black spots in my vision that I can barely see. Suddenly, I see a figure wearing grey walk around the corner. I look up to see her face. No…. My mother is dead. She can't be here.
"I am so very proud of you, Beatrice."
She speaks just like she did before I transferred to Dauntless.
"Mother… I'm, I'm so sorry. I could have done more to save Dad."
"Beatrice, you can let go of life now. Come with me, and reunite with your father."
"What about Christine? And Tobias?"
"They will support each other. Friends help each other up, and lean on each other when they need support."
"But, Tobias….."
I don't know if I actually cried, or if I hallucinated from blood loss, but I felt several loud sobs come from me.
"If you would like to stay, you may. Your father would be proud."
I weighed the pros and cons. Paradise with my deceased friends and family, or on Earth with Tobias and Christina and Zeke.
"I love you, Mother. I'm going to stay here, and live my life to the fullest."
"I love you too, Tris. You have chosen wisely. Love over riches is one of the hardest choices there is. "
With that final statement, she grabbed my hand for a moment, let go, and turned the corner. I finally black out from blood loss.
3 Days Later
I wake up, feeling like a dumpster truck ran over me ten times over. I can't lift my head, but I feel people touching my skin, or ruffling my hair. Time does not matter. I just want the pain to end. I soon feel myself drift into the realm of unawareness again.
Anyways, I wanted to get this out in time for the Triduum. I will be writing over the Triduum, but I probably won't have my ESO:V story out until Sunday. Anyways, I need to know if you guys want Uriah to live, and if so, be paired with Christina. Haters may hate, flamers may flame, reviewers may review, and I won't give a damn about haters and flamers.
