A/N this is my first story so I hope you like it!
P.S. i do not own any of the characters in this story, they belong to Stephanie Meyer
Chapter One: First Vision
APOV I, Mary Alice Brandon, am four years of age and today I woke up on the day of my birthday, from a fun dream. For my birthday I got a brand new dolly, and I played with her all day, feeding her and dressing her.
I got up and Ms. Emily helped me get dressed so I could go out and play. I started to run outside, when my Mother called out and said," Mary, please come to the kitchen before you go outside!" I ran into the kitchen and found a beautifully wrapped box on the table. She said," Go ahead, it is for you." As I was unwrapping it she yelled out," Happy Birthday!" once she knew I saw what it was.
The doll had pretty, long blonde hair and sparkling blue eyes, she wore a pretty green dress and a little bracelet with Anne inscribed on it, just like the one in my dream last night.
I told my mother," Oh I love her! She is just like the one I dreamed of last night!"
I watched as a horrified expression grew onto my mother's face, she had known that I had never seen a doll like this before.
She told me," That's good honey, I hope you like her. I have to go into town today, so Ms. Emily will help you if you need anything.
I played with Anne all day long, and that night Ms. Emily tucked her into bed with me. Later on after I had been sleeping a while, I heard the clip-clopping of horse's hooves.
"In there!" yelled a man I did not recognize.
They knocked loudly on the door and when my father answered it the men came barging in asking my father where I was. My father told the along with many questions, as they came into my room and carried me outside, in my nightgown no less. My father kept asking the same question," where are you taking her?"
They answered in an unemotional voice," The Asylum."
"What? But, why?" asked my father
"Ask your wife, she came in this afternoon telling us her daughter was seeing things." A different man said.
My mother cried as they put me in the back of the carriage and too me away to the Asylum. The whole ride I was terrified of what was going to happen.
Once we got there they took me inside and put me in a room, I couldn't see anything, and just told me to go to sleep, their treatments will star in the morning
A/N please review, i would love to hear your critique