Me: So this is my first fan fiction and I hope its good!
Jack: If its not about me then its not gonna be good...
Aki: Be nice Jack!
Jack: NEVER!
*Aki and Jack start fighting*
Me *sweat drops*: Ummm I don't own anything but the idea sooooo yeah...ON WITH THE STORY!
Crow sat on a bench overlooking the ocean. He ran a hand through his already messy orange hair and tried to recap what happened earlier that day.
Flashback:
"Hey Aki!" called out Crow from the other end of the street.
Aki who was still wearing her school uniform turned around and broke into a smile when she saw her friend. "Hello Crow, what are you doing here?"
Crow walked up to her,"I was looking for you" he said with a slight blush on his cheeks.
"Oh, well how can I help you?"
"Ummmm I was just wondering if you could possibly maybe goonadatewithme?"
"What? I didn't catch that."
"Can you go on a date with me?" said Crow while blushing furiously.
Aki blushed a deep crimson red and stammered: "S-Sorry, but I-I'm going out with Yusei as of yesterday..." she then waved and ran off in the opposite direction.
"HAHAHAHAHAHA! I cannot believe you fell for that Crow. I mean I know you were desperate but I didn't think you'd go that far." Jack was rolling on the ground with laughter. Crow was furious, his eyes stung from being set up like that. He walked up to Jack and punched him with all his might. "Hey what was that for?!"
"You know for what." Crow said through gritted teeth. He then turned and ran off.
End Flashback
Crow couldn't believe he had been taken for a fool. Obviously Aki wouldn't like him...no one would. This wasn't even the first time he'd been rejected, it had happened so many times that even Carly took pity on him. Carly who couldn't go on a date to save her life- "Crow." A soft voice behind him said. He turned around. Ruka was standing there in her duel academy uniform gazing at him shyly.
"Can I sit here?" she asked.
"Sure kid."
"I heard from Jack and Aki what happened and decided to come see you when they said that they hadn't seen you from the morning." she stated. "Crow I know what your problem is."
He jerked his head up at her. "What?" he said while thinking that this kid couldn't possibly know what his problem was.
"You chase too much and don't wait for the right moment. You're too eager to pounce when you should wait and look for the signs. In fact, I'll bet that you don't even love any of the girls you thought you did. It was just lust. Everyone has a true love in the world and you just have to wait for yours." She squeezed his hand and hopped of the bench.
"Wait Ruka!" he called after her after digesting what she said. She turned around and smiled softly. "Yes Crow?"
"Thanks for the advice, I think I can go back to the others now." They walked back together. I'll wait as long as it takes Ruka...
Me: Well...
Aki: Not that bad for a first attempt but it could be better.
Jack: YOU ADDED THAT DOVESHIPPING MOMENT IN THE END ON PURPOSE!
Me: I did? Oh well thats my favourite pairing after all but I didn't mean it. Anyways...JACK I COMMAND YOU TO DO THE ENDING!
Jack: ...fine...Review or be Atlas Punched into oblivion...
Aki: Tips are also appreciated!