hey guys, this is the first chapter of my fist fan fix, so be honest, is this good? i am going to get into the real story soon i just wanted them practicing magic for a bit. plus i think its a good opener.

Ryhtian's P.O.V.

"just consintrate" I said, her eyes where closed. She was trying to levitate. She opened her eyes and said " I can't do it! I don't have the power!" she was very frustrated. "don't worry just try again, don't give up. I belive in you!" she closed her eyes again. I walked over to her and put my hands on her shoulders, she began to float. She looked surprised but then she stoped.

Zoey's P.O.V.

I knew I didn't have the power. It was rythian who made me float. I sighed. "I told you I didn't have the power" I went to the bed room. Why does this have to be so difficult? Science is much easyer to learn. But rythian would kill me if he found out. when we re-bilt blackrock he told me about what the endermen did to him * flashback *

"Zoey?" "yes rythie?" "I have something to tell you, its about the mask." "oh,ok" I stoped what I was doing to listen. "ok, so when I was a child around 10 ½ years old I was taken by the ender queen, but she wasn't in her dragon form, she was a woman with black scales instead of skin. She took me from my parents. I never saw them again. She took me to a enderman science facility. They tested on me, turned me into one of them, only my shoulders and the lower part of my face showed it. thats why I where the mask."

he took off his mask. I didn't know how to react, so I kissed him. * flashback ends *

Rythian's P.O.V.

"Zoey, come back!" I hate when she does this, she gets mad at me for helping her and goes to the bed room. She hardly ever cries, I hate seeing her sad. She is the only person who makes me happy. She had tears streaming down her face, she was just stairing at nothing, I think she was in deep thought.

I knocked on the dooor, she snaped back into reality. I sat next to her on the bed. "you do have the power, you just needed some help getting started, now that your body knows that it can do it, you will be able to get started on your own. Wanna try again?" she sighed. " ok I guess i'll try again." so we went down stairs. I told her " I didn't even transfer that much magic, just a spark.i love you, and I believe in you, no matter what." I took her hand in mine and said "imagine yourself flying, it will help, don't give up!

Zoey's P.O.V.

I was doing it, I was flying! Without the ring! Ever since the nuke, the rings and stuff wern't working. I opened my eyes I was still flying! Rythian was flying too! He took my hand and led me outside. He asked me "may I have this dance?" I gigled "Why of course." we where dancing through the night, he was a great dancer! Whirling and twirling through the night, we ended up at the lake where I fell from the sky. He diped me took of his mask and kissed me.

so please r&r i love the reveiws, also let me know if you want me to continu this fan fic. love you all goodbye for now!