Avatar 2.0
Summary: What if Jake wasn't a harden marine, but a 19 year old sniper whose dream WAS to come to Pandora. An alternate/different version of Avatar. Basically the same plot line, with some changes to the backgrounds. A few OCs, some character changes, but mostly the same story. JakeNeytiri, NormTrudy fluff. First story, review gently, please. Rated T, because it's for teenagers. Action, Romance, Sci-fi, adventure, humor, drama. Trial story.
Author's prologue:
HELLO! PLEASE DO NOT STOP READING! Sorry brief note here: this is my first story so please go easy on the flames! Hee. Anyway, this is the first chapter of my story, the rest will be posted on a later date. If I get many positive reviews, then I will continue it, but first I need some people telling me that I should continue working on it. The story's all there; I just need to get it written down.
When I get the reviews, I start uploading and have it updated regularly.
Quick preview, this is really my own version of Avatar. I saw it back in December and I stayed at walmart on April 21 till midnight to get my hands on an actual DVD copy. Since my first viewing, I kept replaying the film in my head, until I started putting my own ideas into it. I'm not saying this is better than the actual film, it's very hard to compete with James Cameron, but this is my idea, of how the story would have gone if it was written from a teenage mind.
There will be changes in some areas, an OC here or there, maybe a change to a character's back ground.
I OWN NONE OF THESE CHARACTERS OR THE MOVIE! They belong to James, except the OCs.
I've talked enough, here comes the story. If you review, please be easy, first time at this, and be spefic. Tell me what you liked, what you didn't, what made it good, what made it bad. TELL ME!
Anyway, onward and upward.