This is my first story, please don't be afraid to criticize, but don't be too harsh!
I do not own Naruto, but I do own my OC! No stealing her! Please!
Have you ever heard the old story about Aku and Amu, the twin angels? They were nicknamed the Angels of Power, Aku being the Angel of Darkness and Amu being the Angel of Light. Together these two entities were invincible, but nobody knew how they would fare apart.
One day, Aku thought that he was better, but Amu had disagreed saying that she was better. So they had agreed to a duel to determine the better fighter, and henceforth the First War of the Heavens began. They fought for months straight, only stopping for sleep and food, until finally a young girl came, named Angel, and tried to stop this terrible fighting. When the two wouldn't listen to reason, she stood on the middle of the battlefield, to attempt to stop them. By then they had already fired their ultimate attacks, hitting Angel directly. When they saw the girl, bloody and close to death, they felt ashamed. They both, in turn, gave the young girl their powers and lives, in exchange for theirs. These two angels had been heard of in Earth, but not by many. In these times, they had been just about oblivious to most humans.
After she gained these miraculous powers, she was outcasted by the other angels in heaven, for supposedly, 'taking the lives of the best things that ever happened to heaven'. At first, a few people believed in her, but soon joined the malicious entities of heaven. As time passed even Yami, God, had started to hate her. With her being only the age of 5, Angel couldn't understand why what seemed to be the entire residence of heaven hated her. She thought she was just stupid and weak, but couldn't be sure. Then, a very powerful demon came from the human world, from Earth, and attacked the residence of heaven, and Yami thought that as punishment for taking the lives of Aku and Amu, he would seal the demon in Angel, and send her to Earth. Although when he sealed the demon in her, she fused with the 10 Tailed Fox Demon, becoming a fox-hanyō angel. She grew claws, fangs, fluffy ears, and a really fluffy tail, which astonished the young Angel. Then, she was sent to Earth with only a small, pure white dress that almost resembled feathers at the edges, sent out to be a lone angel.
{A/N- Had to put the last part, I just couldn't help myself}
The young girl awoke, shivering because of her lack of heavy clothing. She watched as snowflakes danced down from the sky, one or two occasionally landing on her. She was wondering what to do, as she began to just wander around, and eventually found a road, and smelled for the scent of humans.
She headed in a direction that smelled faintly of people, trudging through the cold, white snow. With her bright white dress and her abnormally pure white hair, she almost blended in with the snow, for even her tail and ears were white. She slowed down, and thought about her life before this.
What will they think? She thought to herself as she made her way slowly to what seemed like a large village. She didn't want to risk her chances, and went around the outside of what seemed like the villages defense wall. She didn't want this life to end up like her last one; she could barely hold back the tears. She never asked for her power, why did they blame her? She thought to herself as she saw a small hole in the wall of the village. She crawled through, only to find a kid, about her age, with the same tail and ears as her.
She wanted to say hello, and maybe be friends, but then as she was about to walk up to him, she fainted, and the last thing she saw was a blond hair hanyō running up to her.
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The blond hanyō rushed to the hospital, worried sick about the frigid body of the girl he found, a hanyō girl, who he had found collapsed. Making it there, he entrusted the girl to the care of the nurses and doctors, and waited till he could visit her.
After about half an hour, the young hanyō got tired of waiting, and was about to leave when the nurse came and told him she was ok, and was now awake. What a coincidence, I wouldn't have been able to last another minute in that room, the young boy thought to himself as he walked down the hallway. He walked into the room the nurse told him the girl was in, and he entered.
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As the door opened, the young girl in white turned to see the young boy, hanyō, just as she thought. He pulled up a chair next to her bed, and he tugged on one of her many blankets. After a small amount of awkward silence, the boy cleared his throat. As she looked at him, he said, "Hello, my name is Naruto Uzumaki, what is yours?"
"A-a-angel… um…, just Angel," she said in what seemed like a whisper, but she hadn't moved her mouth. Then, when Naruto asked how she'd said that, she had simply replied, "Telepathy". When Naruto was amazed, she felt wonderful. Never had somebody looked at her like so, and she couldn't help but smile.
What do you think of my first chapter of my first story? Pretty cool, if I do say so myself. It doesn't have much plot and probably has a few mistakes seeing as though only I am reading this before I publish it, and it's like midnight right now.
So I'll update it if I get the chance to soon, but until then farewell. Now to sleep, or eat some ramen…
