Rising Dusk
Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon or any of the games, Nintendo does. I do however have Dusk,Storm and Shatter on all my battle teams. This is my first time ever writing a pokemon story, so forgive me if it's not good at all
The tale of a trio of Eevee siblings, and the oldest of the trio Dusk, and his struggles
Chapter 1 : The Beginning
I guess I should explain who I am. WHAT I am, if anyone even knows. I was born to a Vaporeon father and a Jolteon mother. From the very beginning I was different. I was a shiny but a different type of shiny. My pelt never stayed one color, always changing, which made me a target for abuse from my family. Yes my own mother and father hated me, and some of my sibling followed their lead. I was the stranger in my own family, and soon a deep grudge against them rose in my heart. That was the day I felt something inside me. Wickedness, yet potential. The only two siblings that stood by my side were Storm and Shatter, and their are the world to me. I will destroy anyone that wishes to harm them. My name is unknown, unless you count Freak as a name. That's what I was called. I only felt my siblings warmth on the cold nights, and it was I who taught myself how to fight. I fought my siblings, and pummeled them when we were just pups. They never were fair though, and the scars on my body prove it. I was always the fighter. I was 3 months old when my parents kicked my out, deeming me useless. Such loving parents. That day I learned another thing. Rage. Resentment. And a broken heart. As I left Storm and Shatter joined me, much to our parents dismay. They ignored the pleas as we left. Not one of us looked back that day.
I would love some reviews, criticism, but please no flames. I just started, but i really want to make this a good story. Thanks
RisingThunder
Chapter 2:Coming Soon
