Hello guys and girls. This is a parody of Relationship Sues. Initially Hilary will be the only "Bey Girl" in the story but the rest will come along later. Please leave me reviews and give me honest feedback about how well I did the Sue. Thanks!
Disclaimer: I don't own any part of the Beyblade franchise. All I own is the Mary Sue.
The New Girl Arrives
The morning started normally enough. The Bladebreakers were all in class and the teacher had just come in.
"Hello, class. A new student will be joining us. She's a transfer student from the United States. I hope you will all greet her warmly."
A young woman walked in and gave a dazzling smile. She had gemlike chocolate-brown orbs and long, cascading, luxuriant ruby curls. She had a petite hourglass figure and C-Cup breasts.
"Hello, my name is Marie-Elizabeth-Rochelle-Fitzgerald," the girl said.
Every guy was immediately transfixed by her beauty. All the girls, seeing the boys' reactions, cast disapproving glances in her direction, especially Hilary Tatibana, whose boyfriend Tyson Granger had also been entranced. He stared at Marie with a lazy smile and half-lidded eyes. Hilary looked around and saw Max, Ray, Kenny, even Kai & Daichi with the same love-struck looks on their faces. Her glare intensified.
Marie came over and sat next to Tyson and Hilary.
"Hi," she said sweetly. "What are your names?"
"Tyson Granger…" Tyson practically slurred.
Marie traced her hand on Tyson's cheek. "You're cute," she cooed. Tyson blushed.
"You're cute too," he said.
"Cute? Try sexy," Daichi muttered.
Though inwardly seething, Hilary put on a fake smile. "My name is Hilary Tatibana," she said. And if you don't want those pretty little eyes gouged out, you best never touch MY Tyson ever again! She added in her thoughts.
"Alright class, let's continue with the lesson," the teacher said.
At lunch time, everyone (except for Hilary) made it a point for Marie to sit with them. The rest of the Bladebreakers introduced themselves and all the attention was once again squarely focused on the gorgeous new girl. Hilary simply sighed and ate in silence.
"Are you a beyblader?" Tyson asked.
"No…I know the basics of the game but I've never actually played," Marie said.
"Well then we'll teach you!" Kenny said enthusiastically.
"Yeah. Come over to Tyson's house after school," Max said. Rei, Kai and Daichi nodded in agreement.
"Alright…" she said, giving a shy smile.
You guys can teach her, I'm not touching her with a ten-foot pole. Hilary thought.
Tyson suddenly seemed to rediscover Hilary's existence and turned to her. "Hilary, how do you feel about letting Marie into the group?" he asked.
"Does my opinion really matter?" she muttered, looking down at the table rather than at him.
Confused at her response, Tyson lifted her chin so she would look at him and smiled at her. "Of course it matters. You're a part of the team too," he said.
There's no point in saying no. The guys would resent me and I'd be overruled anyway.
"Sure. She can come," Hilary said softly. She gave a half-hearted smile, but there was no joy in her voice.
"Well then, that settles it!" Ray said. "Welcome to the team, Marie!"
"Oh thank you so much everyone!" Marie said.
That afternoon, the guys led Marie to Tyson's dojo. Hiro came over and smiled at the new girl.
"Who's your new friend?" he asked.
"My name is Marie-Elizabeth-Rochelle-Fitzgerald" she said before the others could speak.
"We're gonna teach her how to Beyblade," Kenny said.
"I see. Well, welcome to the team," he said.
"Come on Marie, we'll set up a bey-dish for you," Tyson said.
"Do you have a beyblade?" Max asked.
Marie nodded and pulled one out of her pocket.
"Great!" Daichi said. "Battle me first."
The two went over to the bey-dish and launched their beyblades. Marie's beyblade wobbled a lot and Strata Dragoon knocked it out in one hit.
Marie began to tear up and dropped to her knees sobbing. The boys all ran over and knelt down, looking very concerned.
"What's wrong?" Max asked.
"I stink! I'll never be a great beyblader!"
"Hey, don't talk like that," Ray said, putting a comforting hand on her shoulder.
"You've just started, so you should expect this on the first few tries," Kai said.
"With enough practice, you'll be great one day," Max said, smiling at her.
Sniffling, she wiped her tears away. "You guys really mean it?" Marie asked hopefully.
"We sure do!" Kenny said.
Marie stood up and was smiling again. "Thank you."
"Let's start over," Daichi said.
"Remember Marie, you have to concentrate," Tyson said.
Daichi and Marie launched their beyblades again. Marie's expression changed to one of absolute determination, yet she was still able to keep the warm glow of her milky-white, creamy, spotless skin. This time Marie was able to maneuver out of the way of Strata Dragoon's attacks with ease and with just three hits knocked Strata Dragoon out.
Daichi and the rest stood there shocked. Then everyone (except for Daichi and Hilary) came over to congratulate her.
"You did great!" Ray said.
"That was amazing!" Max added.
"You have potential to be a world champion," Kenny said.
Marie went over to Daichi and gave another one of her radiant smiles. "Don't feel bad Daichi. You did really well too." She kissed him on the cheek and he blushed, breaking into another love-struck grin.
Hilary however, narrowed her eyes at the whole situation. Beginner, my ass
"Hey Hil, aren't you going to congratulate Marie too?" Tyson asked.
Hilary put on another false smile. "Of course. Very good Marie," she said with as much sincerity as she could muster. "You guys keep practicing. I'm going to go and get something to eat," she said.
"Wait Hil, I'm come with you," Tyson said. He put his arm around her and pulled her close, smiling at her. Hilary, wanting to enjoy this while it lasted, put her head down on his shoulder and the two walked into the dojo.
Marie watched this scene with great interest, her shining chocolate-brown eyes filled with curiosity.
"Why does Tyson seem to be so friendly with Hilary?" she asked.
"Hilary's his girlfriend," Kenny said.
"Well, that certainly would explain the nickname," she muttered to herself.
"They used to fight all the time, but now, you hardly see them apart," Max said.
A small, but evil smirk slowly formed on Marie's lips. I see…well, I can take care of that problem in short order. Tyson won't be yours for much longer Hilary…
