well here it is rewritten and in my eye better. but my view don't count yours does so review darn you! oh and nothing much changed. the way kagura dies though changes!! and i'm lazy people. so you might see some things that are weird. don't ask about em ok.

milly: dude i got this story plot after months of thinking this is chapter one of from death comes love

iruka: why did you name it that?

milly: cause i can now do your job!

iruka: fine. milly does not own or will she ever own gintama or any of it's characters.

milly: enjoy! oh and just to let u kno i love the dinner that is going to happen. i make it often cause it easy and simple. but it ain't japanese or at least i don't think so lolz

she walked down the ally way angry still at her friend. "why does he have to go around eating all the food and saving none for me. hmph we'll just see how he likes not being able to get in the house." the girl kept mumbling to herself not noticing the women creeping up behind her. Just as she noticed it was to late, she felt a sword against her throat and soon fell to the ground. her head rolled a few feet away from the body and was stopped by a foot. "now now dear don't go losing your head." with that the woman let out a small maniacal laugh at her sick joke...

(meanwhile over at shipachi's)

"Gin-san... why are u here so late?" gintoki was standing out in the cold of the night infront of shinpachi's door. "Kagura left the house and locked me out." shinpachi just gave him a blank stare and moved aside so his friend could get in. "What was it this time?" "I ate all the food that was for dinner. i thought she would be gone all night. she came back got angry at me pushed me out the door, shut it and locked it then walked away." Shinpachi just nodded and walked into the kitchen. "sis is running late so i have to make dinner. your welcomed to stay just don't get onee-san angry ok." gintoki just sat down and ignored his friend's idle threat.

Gintoki looked around for something to do. 'nothing to do here in this dojo. well cept sleep.' gintoki let out a sigh. he looked over at shinpachi while he was cooking. 'how does he know how to cook so well?' the man looked around once more before letting out yet another sigh. "OI. Shinpachi can i help you cook?" shinapchi paused in his job for a moment. 'did he just ask to help? that's not like gin-san at all' "um sure..." gintoki got up from where he was sitting and walked over to shinpachi. "what can i do?" shinpachi thought this over a minute " you can start making some soup." gintoki set to work.

with gintoki busy with the soup shinpachi took a moment to clean up some things around the house. He started with otae's room. he picked up her dirty clothes and rearranged somethings then went to get the dirty clothes from his room. shinpachi room, unlike his sisters, is very neat and clean. he even folds up his dirty clothes and put them neatly in a pile while his sister just threw them all over her room. he sighed as he picked up his dirty yet neat pile of clothes. he took them down the the wash room and set them there for later.

he then went back into the kitchen to see that gintoki was still at hard work with the soup. shinpachi walked over to him and peered in to see that the soup was very simple. it was noodles with chicken broth added to it. shinpachi smiled for no reason he just felt like it. he walked over to check on the garlic bread. "hmmm they seem done." he pulled the garlic bread out of the oven and set it down carefully seeing as it was still hot.

after everything was done the door to the dojo opened and in stepped Otae. "hi onee-san." Otae just had a looks of sadness on her face and did not respond to shinpachi. "What's wrong onee-san?" Otae looked up at her little brother and just started crying. shinapchi hugged her and started to worry. Otae never cried infront of him. "whats wrong onee-san?!" otae hugged her brother tightly and mumbled a few words. "i'm sorry i didn't hear u." Otae lifted her head and looked her little brother straight in the eyes, "kagura was found dead. hijikata-san came and told me at work."

gintoki and shinpachi just stood there in shock. shinapchi's arms fell from his sister's sides. Gin-san stood and said nothing. he looked over to shinpachi who was white as a ghost. otae was trying to get her borther to talk but he was in to much shock to say anything. shinpachi soon fell to the floor. otae then got worried and tried to snap her brother out of it. gintoki walked over to shinpachi and whisperd something in his ear that otae could not hear.

Shinpachi just lowerd his head and gintoki stayed with him. "shinpachi-kun..." shinapchi looked up into his beloved friends eye's and saw hurt beyond belief in them. "gin-san...she's gone this time...really gone..." GIntoki hugged his friend awkwardly. "i know shinpachi-kun i know..." that was it no one said anything else for the rest of the night. they didn't even touch the food. no one felt like eating. or doing anything. they just sat there and grieved. soon though they got tired. shinpachi didn't feel like moving from his spot but knew it'd be better if he went to his room. with out saying anything the others followed. Otae showed Gintoki to a guest room. then went off to her own.

the eerie silence that took over the house was so unbearable that shinpachi finally broke down while in his room. gintoki and otae heard his quiet sobs. "shinpachi-kun...if i was able to i would take away your pain." gintoki knew though that shinpachi would never let him be that close to him. gintoki for the first time was scared, not for himself but for his friends. he was thinking that who ever killed kagura would most likely try and kill shinpachi and otae as well.

gintoki went to sleep with a troubled mind... shinapchi fell asleep crying... and otae went to sleep with no peace at all. in the morning they awoke but none of them felt like saying anything to each other that day. the impact of kagura's death was to deep. they were not sure what to do...

milly: i know not the best but it's better then my last one and this is just chapter one. sorry i made kagura die so quickly. i know it should of had her at least fight back but oh well i liked it! but as i said it's your view that counts. tell me what you want from this story and maybe it'll help! thank you for reading and review damn you review! bye-bye