Ok, this is my first ever fic so please read and review. I've finally
found time to write a fic, I'm so excited. All criticism is welcome, so
please be open with whatever you have to say cuz it'll help me.
Disclaimer: I own nothing except for like Liana, and Isobel, everything else belongs to like Disney. So please no sue.. Uh yeah here's the story.
She stood on the cliff looking over the sea with longing in her midnight blue eyes, her long black hair blowing in the wind. She silently played with her necklace, which had been her great-grandmothers. The necklace held an enchanting sapphire stone set in a heart held by two hands. It had been given to her at her birth, for she was the first of her family since her great-grandmother to be bound to the sea. Her tears could flood a town, or send ships to their grave if she wasn't careful, and with a simple command she could make it rain.
Deep in her thoughts she heard her name being called, "Leah, Leah you need to head into the market." It was her sister Isobel, who like Leah, was bound to something. Isobel was bound to the Earth and could make anything grow wherever she went. Isobel was one of the only reasons Leah stayed here, her love of Ireland and the people of this small town was the only other. Everyday was filled with pain from the longing to be out on the sea. "I'm on my way now." Leah smiled at her sister. "Will you becoming with me today?" "No, I've some things to do here. I'll see you when you get back." Isobel smiled back at her and pushed her towards the town. Leah spent most of the day in her small little town where everyone knew her. After making her purchases and talking to countless people, she made her way down to the docks. She stood at the end of the docks watching the sunset when she saw a strange ship approaching. As it neared she saw a bunch of men dressed rather strangely, and it dawned on her they were pirates. She ran as quickly as she could to the watch tower to alert the town, but the ship reached the town before she made it. Soon the town was set afire and the air was filled with screaming. Leah ran the fastest she could to reach her home and sister. As she got there she heard her sister scream, and running into the house she saw her sister fall to the ground dead. "NOOO!" The pirate looked up and started coming toward her with an evil grin on his face. Leah grabbed a pistol off the mantle and shot at him. She hit him in the arm, and as she went to take another shot someone grabbed her from behind. She dropped the gun as she tried to struggle out of the grip she was held in, but she wasn't strong enough. She was dragged outside where she watched her house be set on fire. While screaming and kicking she willed rain to come down on the town and put the fires out. The pirates paid no attention to the rain and took her back to the ship. "The cap'n ill ave fun with er." The pirate holding her said with an evil laugh. They made it onto the ship after dragging Leah threw her ruined town. They brought her to the captain and threw her to his feet, "We brought ye a presnt cap'n. She put up a fight an we kno ye like em feisty." The captain looked her up and down nodding with approval, "Liana Tempest" As he said that Leah looked up surprised he knew her name. "Good job boys, I'll enjoy her much." Leah cringed when he said that, and she felt sick when he looked her up and down. The captain reached down to touch her and she spit at him. Grinning he said, " Lock her up in the brig and see how she likes it down there, since she doesn't seem to like the company up here too much." She was thrown in the dirtiest cell of the brig and locked up. Scared, angry, and grief-stricken Leah did not cry. She knew the danger she would put herself in if she let the pain out, she may be bound to water but she could still be killed by it. She fell asleep trying to keep her emotions in check for just a short while, and wandering why this pirate knew who she was. As she drifted off to sleep she let one tear slide down her check, causing it a light rain to fall on her beloved Ireland.
Uh, yes it's kinda short, but hopefully they'll get longer. So did you like? Yes, no, maybe so? Please tell me your thoughts and review. Thanks. Oh, what about the pirate talk? That was kinda weird so tell me if it like sucks. I decided the captain could have proper grammar, well at least as proper as mine is.
Disclaimer: I own nothing except for like Liana, and Isobel, everything else belongs to like Disney. So please no sue.. Uh yeah here's the story.
She stood on the cliff looking over the sea with longing in her midnight blue eyes, her long black hair blowing in the wind. She silently played with her necklace, which had been her great-grandmothers. The necklace held an enchanting sapphire stone set in a heart held by two hands. It had been given to her at her birth, for she was the first of her family since her great-grandmother to be bound to the sea. Her tears could flood a town, or send ships to their grave if she wasn't careful, and with a simple command she could make it rain.
Deep in her thoughts she heard her name being called, "Leah, Leah you need to head into the market." It was her sister Isobel, who like Leah, was bound to something. Isobel was bound to the Earth and could make anything grow wherever she went. Isobel was one of the only reasons Leah stayed here, her love of Ireland and the people of this small town was the only other. Everyday was filled with pain from the longing to be out on the sea. "I'm on my way now." Leah smiled at her sister. "Will you becoming with me today?" "No, I've some things to do here. I'll see you when you get back." Isobel smiled back at her and pushed her towards the town. Leah spent most of the day in her small little town where everyone knew her. After making her purchases and talking to countless people, she made her way down to the docks. She stood at the end of the docks watching the sunset when she saw a strange ship approaching. As it neared she saw a bunch of men dressed rather strangely, and it dawned on her they were pirates. She ran as quickly as she could to the watch tower to alert the town, but the ship reached the town before she made it. Soon the town was set afire and the air was filled with screaming. Leah ran the fastest she could to reach her home and sister. As she got there she heard her sister scream, and running into the house she saw her sister fall to the ground dead. "NOOO!" The pirate looked up and started coming toward her with an evil grin on his face. Leah grabbed a pistol off the mantle and shot at him. She hit him in the arm, and as she went to take another shot someone grabbed her from behind. She dropped the gun as she tried to struggle out of the grip she was held in, but she wasn't strong enough. She was dragged outside where she watched her house be set on fire. While screaming and kicking she willed rain to come down on the town and put the fires out. The pirates paid no attention to the rain and took her back to the ship. "The cap'n ill ave fun with er." The pirate holding her said with an evil laugh. They made it onto the ship after dragging Leah threw her ruined town. They brought her to the captain and threw her to his feet, "We brought ye a presnt cap'n. She put up a fight an we kno ye like em feisty." The captain looked her up and down nodding with approval, "Liana Tempest" As he said that Leah looked up surprised he knew her name. "Good job boys, I'll enjoy her much." Leah cringed when he said that, and she felt sick when he looked her up and down. The captain reached down to touch her and she spit at him. Grinning he said, " Lock her up in the brig and see how she likes it down there, since she doesn't seem to like the company up here too much." She was thrown in the dirtiest cell of the brig and locked up. Scared, angry, and grief-stricken Leah did not cry. She knew the danger she would put herself in if she let the pain out, she may be bound to water but she could still be killed by it. She fell asleep trying to keep her emotions in check for just a short while, and wandering why this pirate knew who she was. As she drifted off to sleep she let one tear slide down her check, causing it a light rain to fall on her beloved Ireland.
Uh, yes it's kinda short, but hopefully they'll get longer. So did you like? Yes, no, maybe so? Please tell me your thoughts and review. Thanks. Oh, what about the pirate talk? That was kinda weird so tell me if it like sucks. I decided the captain could have proper grammar, well at least as proper as mine is.