The unbreakable is broken

"-I could just kill you, you know?"

"By making a simple move you could be on the floor bleeding to death. Does not that seems fun ?"

"She was terrified to an extreme point she couldn´t think move or even talk she was numb paralyzed the only thing that proved that she was alive was her deep breathing and the silent tears that were running down her face."

"-This is the end my dear no one can save you sweetheart maybe if you screamed I would let you live longer but you are no longer entraining you don´t fight anymore why is that darling ? "

"But she never answered maybe because all of that was true or maybe because she didn´t had the strength , the power , the will , she knew that the end was coming and that she couldn´t do anything about it . She was just waiting for it all to end. Lucky her , she wouldn´t had to suffer much longer by what she looked like .

She had wounds all over her body , her legs were purple and were bleeding ridiculously , that was so much blood. Her left arm was bruised and probably broke, her rebel star tattoo had all the outside lines remarked by scars of a razor blade . . Her abdomen was partially bruised and in the right side she had a little scar of a word, a four letter word that was now craved forever on her. Her wounds were a deep red she didn´t even know that it was possible for them to become like that . Only Her face was "safe". Compared to the rest of her body her face looked like an angel .It was dirty and dry, her deep blue eyes were swollen from the many tears she had shed in those few days and that fire that was always lighten up on her eyes was closed down and replaced by fear disgust and pain. The sky colour of her eyes was now more of a greenish .A shining and burning greenish .Her lips were bit broken from the dry of the skin an had bit of blood coming out it felt like papercuts . Her hair was perfectly combed and high In a pony tail and a bow. After almost dying of drowning while she was having her hair washed and combed the captor obliged her to smile while it dried her .Her cheeks were crystal white and her neck was nearly forced to be up. In her wrists in the place of her own and self made scars of a sad past that she had forgotten she now had a rope. A rough, made of plastic and burning her outside rope. She had her feet off the ground and they were undercovered . In fact the only thing she had to cover herself was a white pearl dress the raptor had forced her to dress-It was a simple strapless dress that ended before her knee. The dress was practically see through and the wounds were visible. Her throat refused to emit any sound of any kind at all ,it was drought and hoarse from all the screaming she had done in the first day ,after that she gave up and prayed to die. Even her tears which seemed endless were making her suffer. The tears were harsh and cold.

It was thundering and raining heavily outside and the wind was starting to grow big but she felt like she was burning inside out. There was sweat coming out of many places and she cowered every time it ended in her open marks. Not because she was in pain, she didn´t felt it but because she knew it was pleasing to the maniac watching her with a evil smile on its face. She was no longer Jade West the though girl who scared everyone but not even in her eventual death she will lose the love of breaking the rules of what it seem to be established and she would ever bow down to hundred per cent .

The fearful witch was long dead and now replaced with a broken, traumatized little nineteen years old girl."

"-Oh don´t cry honey you know nothing is going to change, I think you should be happy in your last hours of life, yes happy and proud. Not so many the change to say that they died in my hands"."-Said the sick while moving around and talking dramatically."

If the normal Goth girl were there she would have answer with "I don´t give a fuck about what you think" but she wasn´t and the only thing she could do was close her eyes in a failed attempt to stop the tears.

" - You know you could at least try to be pleasant you know?""Yelled the abductor and proceeding to slap her right white porcelain cheek in a try to gain her reaction."

"But Jade didn't move or emit a sound she just keep her sad look in her now red marked face."

Ok that was the first chapter. I would like to know what you about this. I hope is not too bad because I should be studying for my history test and I love to study history *cough cough No I don´t cough* Damn this allergies . I know I am not the best writer and English is not my mother tongue so if you find any grammar mistakes I would really thank you if you told me them. AAAAAAND If you are reading this I like you already (trust me that is a good thing since I hate ALOT of things.)

Oh if you want something to read go check out my other history "Anyone is what it seems" .Personally I like this better because the other is a bit unrealistic and bad written .Like please I wrote the first chapter in half an hour but I only need 2 more reviews to update it I already have half chapter written so,.. I am talking too much aren´t I ?Weird normally I am quiet So I´m going to shut up now!

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