OK so I had originally planned on not updating this story in FanFiction but have since changed my mind. You can find my story on TWCS at .?sid=1915 or under the pen name exploringplanetearth and title Sorrow. I am uploading the new chapters as well as the revised ones so I would suggest reading all the chapters so that you don't get confused. As you can see I have changed a few things. Anyway please enjoy and let me know what you think. I greatly appreciate all the reviews, story alerts, and favorites. You guys rock.