Summary: A pack of all colors and ideals, but after meeting the flower maiden, they shared a single goal. Reaching paradise. The nobles wished to create their own paradise, but only the wolves could find true Rakuen. This unimaginable pack managed to hold together through betrayal, separation, and more besides. But will they be able to hold together when the unthinkable happens?
A/N- Okay, I'm back for another try at this thing called fanfiction… Now, I've only written a few, so any reviews are a big thing for me… Anyway, I guess I could live with a few flames, but if you could try and keep it to a 'constructive criticism' level, okay? I know this is evil and short, at least compared to my usual work, but it's a prologue… Taking it for a test drive, ya know?
Lone Wolf Pack
An orphaned wolf, driven by his past, knowing that he can only go foreword. An exiled wolf with an icy exterior, struggles to forget a lone wolf's past. A street-smart wolf with a nose for food and an eye for girls, with a dark past that not even he knows of. A naïve young wolf that knows nothing but loyalty, to the humans that he has always known or the pack that he has finally found. A half wolf that prides herself on being a female, unable to return to her past with a knowledge of what she can be.
Alone, these wolves were next to nothing, a stray, a gang leader, a wolf hunter. But together, along with the Flower Maiden, they were a nearly unstoppable. Sometimes agreements were hard to reach, but when everything was on the line, they could count on each other. The nobles, Darcia especially, seemed to be set on splitting them up, or getting the Chosen Wolf to the moonlight crucible, to open their version of Paradise. But they never managed to do it. They kept together until the death and decay that was taking over the world began to reach them. They all fought with their lives, because they knew that only one of them needed to reach Paradise. Kiba, the Chosen Wolf, was the last wolf standing. He, with the help of his fallen pack and Cheza, destroyed Darcia, and brought Paradise to a devastated world.
Kiba walked through the beginnings of Paradise, he seemed suspended in time, and the land around him aging quickly. Before he knew it, the land was in the state it was when everything started. He fought to hold consciousness, the final battle taking its toll on the white wolf. He limped into a dark alley, the humans rushed past his hiding place as time returned to its proper speed. He collapsed on the concrete ground, and watched as the world around him grew blurry. Before he closed his eyes, a final thought flew through his head.
Is this the Paradise I've been searching for?
A/N- So, should I keep going, or nip this in the bud? I've got ideas for where to take it (okay, an outline for the next chapter), but I want some feedback before I post the first chapter… Yes, no, if I include cookies? Review!
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