This is an OC Story. I know a lot of people hate OC stories but i had to Write it down. I probably won't finish it unless somebody tells me that i should.
Characters and story all belong to me.
I was born in the slum apartments on planet Algenite. Algenite was a small planet that held different and alien life. The population was mostly cats that walked upright. There were some other animals but there were few of them.
Algenite has 3 classes. The Uppers, Middles, And Lowers. The uppers lived in the rich city working the government. The middles grew crops in farm class, the lowers, provided the planet with meat and clothing, hand sewn clothing.
My mother was one of the kindest creatures that i have ever known. My father, however, is not. I hated my father with a great loathe. To make it worse, I was named after him! In our language, my name, Larok ment "The Brave". Why my father was named that would be a mystery i would never find out since he was the biggest coward on the planet.
He was also very abusive. Not even before I was a year old he started to train me to hunt and fight. I was excited at first, who wouldn't be? But i soon hated it. Any small slip-up I made was met with a powerful blow from my father. I would go home with bruises and scars. My mother could do nothing or else he would lash out at her.
When i had caught my first piece of prey, my father was proud of me and we went home. i couldn't wait to show my mother and see her beam with pride. But little did I know, that wouldn't happen.
I walked into the apartment. Every thing seemed to move in slow-motion. The smell of blood and death hit my nose. I dropped everything and ran to find my mother. When i did, i wished i hadn't for i had found her murdered body...
All I will do for now. The reason it is Titled Lalron's Tale instead of Lalrok's Tale is because he changes his name later on. Give me some feedback on whether to finish it or not and how the story is so far.