Okay, so I actually wrote this for a class, but I want more opinions on it. Also you can skip the Dramatis personae if you know the characters. It is written like a play. Hope you enjoy, Mitsuki.

Enemy's Friendship

DRAMATIS PERSONAE

ALLEN WALKER: 16 year old exorcist for the Black Order. Destined to be the destroyer of time and holder of the 14th Noah's consciousness.
NEAH WALKER: The 14th Noah and Mana Walkers brother. Used to be on the Earl of Millenniums side and helped to destroy humanity.
MANA WALKER: Allen Walker's step father. Died and was turned into an Akuma. He cursed Allen and takes partial consciousness in Allen.
LENALEE LEE: 16 year old female exorcist who hates war. Treats all of the Black order like family and worries about others before herself.

SETTING: Black Order; an old style castle with many rooms and stairways. Lit by lanterns. Late 19th century. Allen's Mind-scape: Eternal night with full moon and stars shining brightly. One cottage that holds Mana, the 14th, and Allen. Living room holds two couches, a fire place and a white piano.

PROPS: Knee length black coat with the rose cross over heart. White piano, white couches, and fireplace.

START: BLACK ORDER:
(Lenalee enters stage right with full cart of food and knocks on Allen door. Allen is laying on bed stage right)
LENALEE LEE: Allen, I brought you some food. (sighs) Will you please come out. You won't kill anybody by talking. (says calmly, trying to coaxes him out of his room).
ALLEN WALKER: Sorry Lenalee, I don't want to take the chance. Wait for me a little longer. (Whispers while holding his arm over head. Door still closed.)
LENALEE LEE: Alright, I'll leave this here for you then. Jerry misses you. You should pay him a visit when you're hungry. (Walks off stage right, leaving tray next to the door.)
(Allen waits a few minutes then walks stage right, opens door, and inhales food. Locks door and walks
back to bed stage left.)
Inside Allen's head:
NEAH WALKER: If you're so worried you could let me take over. I won't hurt anyone but the Earl. (Chuckles softly at the thought of tearing the Earl to shreds.
ALLEN WALKER: No, you're a Noah. How can I trust someone who helped the Earl torture the souls of man? (Voice is pained in longing and sorrow.)
NEAH WALKER: Have you never heard that I was the traitor of the family and tried to kill the Earl? I thought my brother rose you better than that. (Scoffs at Allen, slightly angry and defensive)
ALLEN WALKER: You were Mana's little brother? (shocked)
Allen's mind-scape in cottage living room:
(Allen appears at center stage, Neah is on a couch left stage)
ALLEN WALKER: How did you become a Noah? (arms crossed still not letting his guard down)
NEAH WALKER: That story is for another day. However, I can tell you that the Earl is the one who made it possible to create a Noah by studying the Noah gene. For a while I thought that the Earl had created eternal life, what a fool I was. So, I decided to stop the madness he created, but look were that got me; stuck in the mind of a teenager. (Sarcastic at the last sentence.)
ALLEN WALKER: How can I trust what you say? (walks from center stage to front, right to sit on the piano bench)
(Mana opens door from front, left stage walks to front, right, places hand on Allen's shoulder)
MANA WALKER: It's true Allen, he is my younger brother, but you will have to choose for yourself weather or not to trust him. (said consolingly, walks toward back stage and disperses)
ALLEN WALKER: Wait, tell me more, Mana, Please. (stands up and reaches hand out towards were Mana's figure was.)
NEAH WALKER: (laughs hard) He always was cryptic. Never felt much like saying things straight to your face.
ALLEN WALKER: You know him well, don't you? (says a little sad.)
NEAH WALKER: I did live wit him for most of my life. (Reminiscent voice) I heard you turned him into an Akuma. (face grows hard, but voice is friendly, almost gently)
ALLEN WALKER: (Covers cursed eye with right hand) Yes. (whispers)
NEAH WALKER: He doesn't blame you, you know.
ALLEN WALKER: Thanks (sets hands on keys, first time he turnes head away from Neah.)
NEAH WALKER: Are you going to play? That's the song Mana and I made up.
ALLEN WALKER: You promise not to attack me?
NEAH WALKER: If you die I die. Sorry, but I'm not that stupid.
ALLEN WALKER: I believe you. I guess I might be able to used to this. (sigh)
(Neah chuckles lightly, sits down next to Allen and plays there song together)
(Allen leaves mind-scape and awakens in his room, stomach growling on bed left stage. He hears a light chuckle in his head)
NEAH WALKER: (not seen on stage) Hungary again?
(Allen ignors his uncle)
BLACK ORDER
(Allen gets up and walks right stage, out door and leaves stage from front stage)
(Enter Lenalee, walking down hallway and meeting up with Allen)
LENALEE LEE: Allen! You came out. Did you talk to him. (yelling in happiness. Runs downstage towards Allen who is at center stage)
ALLEN WALKER: Yeah, he's actually not that horrible. It may take awhile, but he is my uncle. (Looks down with a small smile of hope and listening to Neah)
NEAH WALKER: Not that bad, huh. I guess not.
(Scene fades to black)

FIN