So bored. Thought I'd write a love story. Please contribute any ideas you have and I'd be delighted to change anything. Think of this as a group project and were all working together trying to make an awesome love that would outshine "The Notebook" or "The Lucky One". This is the rough draft. If you'll like to participate write reviews and tell me. Remember no ideas are stupid (or at least stupider than any of my ideas). So great writers, lets write.
Leo
She was gorgeous, more beautiful then Aphrodite herself. Don't get me wrong Aphrodite is pretty but Arianna's beauty was different. It was natural. She didn't use make-up or have surgery on any part of her body and her beauty wasn't just on the outside; it was on the inside too. Her smile was lovely and she wore it every day of the week and her skin was as bright as the sun like it radiated its own light. Her hair was red as fire her eyes were blue like the sea but at the same time intense, it could through you like glass. She is and will forever be perfect. She was mine.
Arianna
I thought he would have come for me years ago. I felt like a princess in her castle waiting for a prince that would never come except for the fact that I didn't look like a princess. I was a red head with messy hair. I barely had any clothes and the clothes I did have were torn, just like my heart. I wasn't rich and I didn't come from royalty. I was tired of waiting…I'm going to get my prince.
Leo
I thought about her almost every second since she left. My life was consumed by her absence. I loved her liked no other and no one could replace the hole in my heart but her. I searched for her for five years with no luck. Why did I wait so long to look for her? Is she looking for me? Does she even remember my name? I remember hers….Arianna Elizabeth Merana. I used to call her mine. I swore to myself the day she left I would keep on looking for her until I take my last breath. That would be soon.
Arianna
I looked for him for almost five years. I swore to myself I'd never stop looking. I grew up on the streets by myself up until I met Dylan. I still remember how he looked that day. He was dazzling. He had short brown hair and beautiful brown eyes that didn't hide anything. He was more beautiful than all the gods combined. His skin was warm and he was kind-hearted. He helped me without expecting anything in return.
What going on is it kinda like a third person point of view telling it as if they were in Arianna's or Leo's position. Major question are…
How did they Arianna and Leo meet?
Why did they break up? (Tragic but not too tragic)
How will they find each other again?
Will there be an obstacle (LBW) stopping them from getting back together?
Give me some inappropriate things so it can be at least rated T
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