Fan's Note; This is my first fan-fic that I've ever posted I'm a little
nervous because I'm typing this on the fly but it should be a good story if
all goes according to plan Oh and I hardly use periods but for the fic I
will. Also I don't own any of the Oh My Goddess characters, just this
little plot. Enjoy!
At the base of Yggdrasil stood Skuld confused of her whereabouts. " What am I doing here?" She thought as a strong wind picked up. "And why is it so cold" She shivered. Searching the palace of heaven her footsteps echoed through the halls, No one in sight. "Where is everyone?" She questioned. Fear rising in her she began to run. The sound of silence in heaven scared her, especially since this part of Yggdrasil was always busy. Skuld found herself in the goddess training quarters. Inside, there looked like a huge battle had taken place. Rubble and debris everywhere, pillars cracked and toppled. "They've completely leveled the place!" She complained. Her senses picked up sharply as a massive wave of negative energy approached. It was coming way to fast to leave Yggdrasil in time, she doubted she could even leave the room in time. The whole palace began to shake and shiver as the mass of negative energy made direct contact with the palace. The training quarters seem to be giving way as the palace was engulfed. Skuld began to panic. Whoever was attacking, she couldn't stop alone, making a break for the outside she heard something that would make anyone stop. "For you crimes against a cardinal rule set forth before your contract, I sentence you to the ultimate punishment!" The almighty spoke. Skuld looked left and right to find the source of the voice. Another pillar fell right beside her, nearly smashing her. "If I am to be punished for loving a mortal the way I do, then punish me, for I do not wish to love anyone else but him." Some one else spoke. The voice seemed so gentle, so soft and soothing, almost sympathetic. "Belldandy?" Skuld questioned. " No. it can't be. She thought out loud. Another pillar fell. This one also hit close to home and she found that she was trapped. "What's going on here?!" She thought. " Skuld, You must leave quickly, please!" Belldandy's voice pleaded. "Belldandy!" Skuld called out. "Please my sister you must leave this place and save your life." Belldandy's voice pleaded once more. "Belldandy!" Skuld called out again. The ceiling of the quarter began to fall. "Belldandy!....BELLDANDY!!!!!" Skuld called one last time as the ceiling buried her alive. The bleak color of dark fear surrounded her.
Skuld awoke with a start. "It.it was only a dream" She stuttered. " No that dream was too real!" She spoke. "I gotta find Belldandy!" Skuld hopped out of bed, her feet thudding against the hardwood floor. In her pj's she ran outside. The crisp morning air gave some sort of comfort as she searched the mini forest in front of the house. She stopped in her tracks, hearing a melody fill the entire forest. Deer, field mice, squirrels and other field animals began to walk in a general direction, As if this song was some sort of calling. A deer nudged Skuld, lifting her on its back. It too followed the song as if it were possessed. "Where are you taking me?" Skuld asked, a smile upon her face. "And who could be singing?" She thought out loud. Though the shrubbery, there sat Belldandy. She sang to a withered tree, although there were leaves and sprouts growing on the tree, the tree itself was old and toppled over, this tree was dying. Belldandy stopped her singing to see Skuld enjoying the melody. Skuld slid off the deer to join her sister forgetting what she was going to say. "Why do you sing to the tree everyday?" Skuld questioned. Belldandy let a gentle smile play upon her face. "Well this tree is the oldest in the forest. It speaks to me. This tree wishes to see many more springs and I'm giving it a little start." She spoke. "But why sing?" Skuld asked. "I sing because the tree likes my singing. It says that it hears my singing when I'm cooking and my singing soothes it. So I sing for the tree. I want the tree to be happy." She answered. "Well it looks like you've attracted a lot of company." Skuld spoke, pointing to the forest creatures. "They also like my singing." Belldandy spoke with an even bigger smile. "When will you teach me to sing like that?" Skuld pouted playfully. Belldandy kneeled eyelevel to Skuld. "I'll teach you how to sing soon." She spoke softly " I know that I promised you before and I intend to keep that promise, okay?" Skuld nodded. "How about you and I go cook breakfast." Belldandy smiled, and then escorted Skuld back to the house of Morisato.
Keiichi's mind was a blur with all the activities plan that day. "We are suppose to be getting new members in the motor club today" He thought. "This should definitely bring in some new ideas" He noticed that Belldandy was once again up with the sun. "Probably with the old tree" He thought out loud. He walked into the living room, listening to the television weather report. The news forecaster reported a sunny day with highs in the mid 70's. "Perfect!" Keiichi spoke. The smell of breakfast began to waft its way into the room. Belldandy was making one of his favorite meals, fried eggs, fish, and nikuman. "Hmm" He sighed. "She always goes out of her way to please me," He thought out loud. He then made his way to the kitchen to find Belldandy hard at work fixing breakfast for the entire household. "Good morning Belldandy!" He called to her. Belldandy looked up from the fried eggs, greeting him with a pleasant smile. "Good morning Keiichi. Did you sleep well?" She asked. "Like a rock." He joked. Belldandy giggled. "Today's a big day," Keiichi stated. "So many things are happening. And we have to prepare for the big race this upcoming Saturday." He said with excitement in his eye. Belldandy nodded her head. "I hope we do well." She stated. "I'm sure we'll do fine." He reassured. "Breakfast is done." Belldandy stated. Keiichi looked at his watch. "I wish we had time to eat but we'll be late for school if we eat. Maybe we should take it with us." He said. Belldandy nodded then turned her attention to the food. "Skuld! Urd! Breakfast is ready!" Keiichi called. Belldandy finished packing breakfast and was putting on her helmet. Keiichi then went to the garage to start his motorbike. "You know you represent the time that Belldandy's been on earth with me." He thought out loud. With a smile on his face, he revved the engine, and then stormed out the garage. Belldandy walked out the front door meeting Keiichi on the street. She stepped into the sidecar. Keiichi took one last look at the house, then sped off. A second later Skuld bolted out the front door. "Wait Belldandy! I forgot to tell you something." Urd walked up behind her, "What's the matter Skuld?" Skuld looked over at Urd with a sad expression "Well I had this dream last night where Yggdrasil and everything was destroyed. And Belldandy and the Almighty where arguing. And the underworld was attacking. Everything was a complete mess. And the worst part is, the dream seemed so real that it may have been more of a premonition than a dream." Skuld finished. "Well premonitions and fortune telling aren't any of your powers but we can't say that this isn't one. We don't want to alarm Keiichi or Belldandy so lets just see how this plays out." Urd said. "But if it is a premonition and we let it play out, then how will we stop it?" Skuld asked "Don't worry, we'll stop it" Urd reassure her. She then turned and re entered the house.
Well that's it for the first chapter. It's kind of sketchy and I'm thinking about redoing it and adding all the things that I took out. When I originally wrote this chapter it was about 2000 words because I explained what happened in between the chapters (sort of) Anyway read and review and let me know what you think and give some ideas too. Although I have the story pretty much mapped out a few ideas may come into play. And if the story is really crappy tell me that too. I need feedback. Until the next chapter, Ja mante ne!
At the base of Yggdrasil stood Skuld confused of her whereabouts. " What am I doing here?" She thought as a strong wind picked up. "And why is it so cold" She shivered. Searching the palace of heaven her footsteps echoed through the halls, No one in sight. "Where is everyone?" She questioned. Fear rising in her she began to run. The sound of silence in heaven scared her, especially since this part of Yggdrasil was always busy. Skuld found herself in the goddess training quarters. Inside, there looked like a huge battle had taken place. Rubble and debris everywhere, pillars cracked and toppled. "They've completely leveled the place!" She complained. Her senses picked up sharply as a massive wave of negative energy approached. It was coming way to fast to leave Yggdrasil in time, she doubted she could even leave the room in time. The whole palace began to shake and shiver as the mass of negative energy made direct contact with the palace. The training quarters seem to be giving way as the palace was engulfed. Skuld began to panic. Whoever was attacking, she couldn't stop alone, making a break for the outside she heard something that would make anyone stop. "For you crimes against a cardinal rule set forth before your contract, I sentence you to the ultimate punishment!" The almighty spoke. Skuld looked left and right to find the source of the voice. Another pillar fell right beside her, nearly smashing her. "If I am to be punished for loving a mortal the way I do, then punish me, for I do not wish to love anyone else but him." Some one else spoke. The voice seemed so gentle, so soft and soothing, almost sympathetic. "Belldandy?" Skuld questioned. " No. it can't be. She thought out loud. Another pillar fell. This one also hit close to home and she found that she was trapped. "What's going on here?!" She thought. " Skuld, You must leave quickly, please!" Belldandy's voice pleaded. "Belldandy!" Skuld called out. "Please my sister you must leave this place and save your life." Belldandy's voice pleaded once more. "Belldandy!" Skuld called out again. The ceiling of the quarter began to fall. "Belldandy!....BELLDANDY!!!!!" Skuld called one last time as the ceiling buried her alive. The bleak color of dark fear surrounded her.
Skuld awoke with a start. "It.it was only a dream" She stuttered. " No that dream was too real!" She spoke. "I gotta find Belldandy!" Skuld hopped out of bed, her feet thudding against the hardwood floor. In her pj's she ran outside. The crisp morning air gave some sort of comfort as she searched the mini forest in front of the house. She stopped in her tracks, hearing a melody fill the entire forest. Deer, field mice, squirrels and other field animals began to walk in a general direction, As if this song was some sort of calling. A deer nudged Skuld, lifting her on its back. It too followed the song as if it were possessed. "Where are you taking me?" Skuld asked, a smile upon her face. "And who could be singing?" She thought out loud. Though the shrubbery, there sat Belldandy. She sang to a withered tree, although there were leaves and sprouts growing on the tree, the tree itself was old and toppled over, this tree was dying. Belldandy stopped her singing to see Skuld enjoying the melody. Skuld slid off the deer to join her sister forgetting what she was going to say. "Why do you sing to the tree everyday?" Skuld questioned. Belldandy let a gentle smile play upon her face. "Well this tree is the oldest in the forest. It speaks to me. This tree wishes to see many more springs and I'm giving it a little start." She spoke. "But why sing?" Skuld asked. "I sing because the tree likes my singing. It says that it hears my singing when I'm cooking and my singing soothes it. So I sing for the tree. I want the tree to be happy." She answered. "Well it looks like you've attracted a lot of company." Skuld spoke, pointing to the forest creatures. "They also like my singing." Belldandy spoke with an even bigger smile. "When will you teach me to sing like that?" Skuld pouted playfully. Belldandy kneeled eyelevel to Skuld. "I'll teach you how to sing soon." She spoke softly " I know that I promised you before and I intend to keep that promise, okay?" Skuld nodded. "How about you and I go cook breakfast." Belldandy smiled, and then escorted Skuld back to the house of Morisato.
Keiichi's mind was a blur with all the activities plan that day. "We are suppose to be getting new members in the motor club today" He thought. "This should definitely bring in some new ideas" He noticed that Belldandy was once again up with the sun. "Probably with the old tree" He thought out loud. He walked into the living room, listening to the television weather report. The news forecaster reported a sunny day with highs in the mid 70's. "Perfect!" Keiichi spoke. The smell of breakfast began to waft its way into the room. Belldandy was making one of his favorite meals, fried eggs, fish, and nikuman. "Hmm" He sighed. "She always goes out of her way to please me," He thought out loud. He then made his way to the kitchen to find Belldandy hard at work fixing breakfast for the entire household. "Good morning Belldandy!" He called to her. Belldandy looked up from the fried eggs, greeting him with a pleasant smile. "Good morning Keiichi. Did you sleep well?" She asked. "Like a rock." He joked. Belldandy giggled. "Today's a big day," Keiichi stated. "So many things are happening. And we have to prepare for the big race this upcoming Saturday." He said with excitement in his eye. Belldandy nodded her head. "I hope we do well." She stated. "I'm sure we'll do fine." He reassured. "Breakfast is done." Belldandy stated. Keiichi looked at his watch. "I wish we had time to eat but we'll be late for school if we eat. Maybe we should take it with us." He said. Belldandy nodded then turned her attention to the food. "Skuld! Urd! Breakfast is ready!" Keiichi called. Belldandy finished packing breakfast and was putting on her helmet. Keiichi then went to the garage to start his motorbike. "You know you represent the time that Belldandy's been on earth with me." He thought out loud. With a smile on his face, he revved the engine, and then stormed out the garage. Belldandy walked out the front door meeting Keiichi on the street. She stepped into the sidecar. Keiichi took one last look at the house, then sped off. A second later Skuld bolted out the front door. "Wait Belldandy! I forgot to tell you something." Urd walked up behind her, "What's the matter Skuld?" Skuld looked over at Urd with a sad expression "Well I had this dream last night where Yggdrasil and everything was destroyed. And Belldandy and the Almighty where arguing. And the underworld was attacking. Everything was a complete mess. And the worst part is, the dream seemed so real that it may have been more of a premonition than a dream." Skuld finished. "Well premonitions and fortune telling aren't any of your powers but we can't say that this isn't one. We don't want to alarm Keiichi or Belldandy so lets just see how this plays out." Urd said. "But if it is a premonition and we let it play out, then how will we stop it?" Skuld asked "Don't worry, we'll stop it" Urd reassure her. She then turned and re entered the house.
Well that's it for the first chapter. It's kind of sketchy and I'm thinking about redoing it and adding all the things that I took out. When I originally wrote this chapter it was about 2000 words because I explained what happened in between the chapters (sort of) Anyway read and review and let me know what you think and give some ideas too. Although I have the story pretty much mapped out a few ideas may come into play. And if the story is really crappy tell me that too. I need feedback. Until the next chapter, Ja mante ne!