Chapter 1

Late Revenge

Chapter One

Clover0724

Disclaimer: I don't own anything you recognize.

Authors Notes: Ok, this is my first time writing anything for others to see. I know there will be mistakes, but hopefully not many. I also don't know how much I can update. I have a lot going on this summer. So here goes nothing.

It was something they did all the time in their line of work. The bad guy was surrounded, they take a hostage, and 5-0 got them back. However, this time was different. Super-seal just had to go get into trouble. But then again, he is a trouble magnet, Danny thought. Then he remembered the old lady on the street. Grace had been talking about her day at school. Then they walked passed a fortune teller, and she said," Bad things are about to come your way."

But Danny didn't believe it. He never did, until the bad thing did happen.

4 Hours earlier 0800 hours HQ

Danny walked into headquarters, and right away saw Steve in his office. He was usually the first one there, and the last one to leave. Danny still didn't understand how Steve got up so early every morning. Not to mention his routine swim and run. Steve seemed to be going on longer swims though. Danny could understand why though, especially with all the stress he's been under. Ever since Catherine left, and Doris vanished again, he's acted a little strange. But still much better than if it was one of them in that situation.

Danny walked into his office and set down his lunch. It looked like it was going to be another day of paper. Maybe if he finished it up quickly they could grab some drinks. After all it was Friday, and he didn't have Grace this weekend. Instead step-Stan and Rachel were going on a trip to the big island. Danny checked his phone, and right when he started his paperwork, Steve walked into his office.

"We got a case. Hostage situation down at the bank on Kawala Street," Steve said as he took Danny's keys. Danny quickly gathered his things, and was walking out as Chin and Kono were. And as always, Danny had Steve's TAC vest as well. When Danny was barley in the car, Steve was taking off, lights and sirens on.

"You know, one of these days you're going to kill us with your driving. And need I remind you, I have a daughter. A daughter who I'd like to walk down the aisle one day," Danny said.

"Well I'll have you know, there are kids at this bank, and I'm sure they'd like to walk down the asile themselves."

"What is with you? You're acting like a teenager with all of your mood swings."

"I'm fine. And I'll let you know, I don't have mood swings."

"Ok, Steven."

When they pulled up to the bank, Duke was walking over, already proving the situation was bad.

"Duke, what do we got?" Steve asked.

"There are 14 hostages, 6 adults, and 8 kids. They just asked for who was in charge when you pulled up. I told them I'd be back in a second."

"Thanks Duke."

Steve walked over as Danny came up behind him. Danny was carrying Steve's vest, but Steve just took it and set it down. Then Steve began to talk into the phone.

"This is Commander Steve McGarrett of the governor's task force. Who am I speaking to?"

"It's been a while commander," the voice spoke.

"Who is this?"

"So you still don't know who it is? I'm upset. I thought you would remember me. After all you killed my brother. You see, when I found out you killed Nick, I wasn't that upset. After all, we had just been in a fight, and as a solider, I pushed past my feelings. But after getting medically discharged, it was time for revenge. Right now no one has been harmed, and it will stay that way. Under one condition, you come alone, unarmed, and no tricks. Am I clear?"

"Yes. Give me a minute and I'll be there."

"Not a minute less."

Then the line went dead, and Danny began to rant.

"You are not going! We have snipers up and they can easily take him out right now. I will hold you back if you have to!"

"Danny I'll be fine. The snipers are too risky. Trust me."

"Fine. But should I send flowers now or later for your funeral? You know what don't even answer that. Can you at least put a vest on under your shirt?"

"Danny, you heard him no tricks. This guy is dangerous, even more so because he is Nick's brother."

"What's his name anyways?"

"Chris Taylor. Danny I got to go, but I promise I'll be fine."

"I'll be fine he says. I'm just going to go trade myself for some guy with a gun. But it's all good. Right?"

"See you in a bit Danno."

Danny watched as Steve walked towards the building. All he could think in that time was, what if that was the last time I see him? What will I tell Gracie when her Uncle Steve isn't coming home? Steve slowly approached the door with his hands up. Chris waved his hand in a motion for Steve to open the door. Steve slowly walked towards him counting the hostages and looking for a plan on how to get out of there.

"I know you got snipers all over. They could easily take me down at any time. But knowing your little friend out there won't risk your life, I think we got some time to figure out a way out of here. And I know Hawaii as well as you do, so no playing tricks on me."

"As far as I know, you haven't lived on Hawaii for most of your life so what makes you so sure?" Steve said. The next thing he knew a solid fist connected with his face.

"I'd watch it McGarrett, or else next time I might not be as nice."

"You call keeping 14 hostages nice? Because if you do I think you need to rethink your definition. You said they could go anyways, as long as I stayed. And I'm staying, so how about you let them go."

"An agreement is an agreement, so I guess. All of you get up slowly, and don't try anything.

All the hostages slowly stood up while Chris aimed his gun at Steve.

"Down on your knees McGarrett. Now I want all of you to slowly walk out the door. And you, lady in the pink, tell detective Williams that I want a SWAT truck full of ammo in the next half hour, or they'll have to find a new leader. Now go."

All the hostages walked out of the bank slowly, and soon all fourteen were safe. Officers were starting to question them when an officer called Danny over.

"Detective Williams, this lady has something she needs to tell you."

"Hi my name is Detective Danny Williams. The officer said you need to tell me something?"

"Yes, then man in the bank asked for a request. He said he wants a SWAT truck full of ammo in the next half hour, or you'll have to find a new leader."

"Thank you for that information."

Danny walked away as quickly as he could. He couldn't give him what he wanted, or Chris would get away with Steve. But if not, Steve would die. Danny wished there was an easy option, or a miracle would happen. Maybe Steve would go all Super- SEAL and get them out of this. Until then, he'd have to talk with Chin and Kono.

"Danny any word?" Kono asked.

"Yeah. Chris said he wants a SWAT truck full of ammo in the next half hour, or we could find a new leader. Obliviously that's not going to happen, or else he'll get away with Steve."

"What about the snipers?" Chin asked.

"It's too risky. Steve could go all Rambo and we could hit him. If we give him the truck he'll disable the tracker, unless we put a smaller one on there. At this point it may be our only option."

"Ok I'll get it together. Kono go tell SWAT and have their guys help. We're running out of time fast. Danny go see if they still have eyes on Steve."

Danny walked over to talk to Duke when Duke handed him the phone.

"Danny its Taylor, he wants to know what's going on with his deal."

"Alright. Thanks Duke. Oh and do you still have eyes on them?"

"No, last we saw they were heading into the main vault, and we can't get thermal imaging. Sorry."

"It's ok Duke. Thanks for the help."

Danny then picked up the phone, and prepared himself for the worst.

"This is Detective Williams, what do you want?"

"You really do have an attitude detective. That's no way to speak to someone with the life of your partner in his hands."

"If you hurt him I swear to god I will kill you with my own two hands!"

"You have ten more minutes' detective. And damage has already been done."

With that the line went dead. Danny looked down at the phone just as a message popped up on the screen.

Steve's Point of View

As soon as all the hostages were out of the building, Taylor tied up Steve's hands leaving no wiggle room. Steve knew it was going to be hard to get out of this one. Going up against Nick was hard enough, and his brother had even more training than him. Chris then pulled Steve up by his hair, and led him back to the vault. Right way Steve knew Chris had gained the upper hand even more.

The room was all metal, so a misfired shot could go anywhere. And to add to it, they couldn't get any of their equipment to work through the walls of the vault. Chris walked out and Steve looked around and found no way for escape. Chris walked back in with a chair moments later, once again pulling Steve up by his hair.

No matter how much it hurt though, Steve would not give in. He'd been through worse. Chris continued to tie Steve to the chair, and Steve realized he wasn't very talkative.

"You know you haven't said a lot. Most people kidnappers would be doing the talking, and the good guy would stay quiet."

"You think you're the good guy McGarrett? Well let me tell you something, good guys don't usually kill innocent people."

"Your brother wasn't innocent. He was a traitor to his country, and he deserved to die. But he should have died slowly, and suffer, like he made others suffer."

Chris then walked over to Steve and landed blow after blow to his face. After that the chair was moved up against the wall and he was kicked in the abdomen. Steve's vision began to grey around the edges, but he would not give in, or pass out.

"The only one who's going to suffer here, is you Steve. And when we leave, you'll feel pain like never before."

With that, he connected one last solid blow to his head, and Steve was out. Chris decided it was time to call Danny, and see how his plan was coming. But first, he needed more leverage. Chris took a picture of the beaten SEAL, with blood running down his nose, and there was a deep gash across his forehead, along with already purple bruising.

"Well it's time to make that call."

Thanks to everyone who has been reading this so far! I hope you like it and please leave comments below. I'll try to update as soon as possible, hopefully twice a week. If there are any errors I'm sorry, again this is my first story. So stay tuned for chapter two!