This is my first fanfic so if you have any suggestions please comment.
I will only continue if I'm asked.
"Ahhh," I screamed in pain as another ash arrow pierced my wing and red crossed my vision. I knew I was loosing consciousness as a flew lower and lower trying to avoid injuring myself further from the fall that was sure to come. As I neared a towering building on the edge of the glowing town the pain finally overtook my senses and sent me spinning into a deep numbing slumber.