The last story I attempted to write had a less than satisfactory ending. So if the readers of fan fiction could give me another chance. I would love to try again. A second shot
Summary: If you keep your eyes closed long enough when you open them will thing be better or worse. Bad summary but a great story trusts me. Please read and review I want to know what you think.
Never Say Never
Chapter one: Things can get better.
Things have a way of always getting from bad to worst in the life of Kagome and Rin. First their parents pass away when the village was attacked. Then they were taken in by a less than perfect man.
"Why can't the two of you be more useful!" the drunken man raged on as he beat the two girls. People past by and took small glances at the commotion but did nothing to stop the violence. The girls curled up in a ball as he swung his belt at them. A man finally stops and grabbed the belt from the enraged man. The man had long silver hair and serious disposition.
"Stop this at once. Have you gone mad?" the silver haired man asked as he helps the girls to their feet.
"They are useless to me and I own them and have the right to do as I please." The man said as he staggered a bit.
"So you would kill them for being useless to you?" the man asked as the girls stood behind him.
"Yes!"
"I want to make you an offer rather than kill them let me buy them from you. I can make very wealthy for merchandise you don't want." The silver haired man held out a small bag heavy with gold coins.
"Fine," the man said snatching the bag away, "they are your problem now." He said staggering away from them.
He turned too looked at the two girls. They were bleeding and their clothes were covered in dirt.
"What are your names?"
"My name is Kagome and this is Rin," Kagome spoke and bowed a little.
"Lord Takahashi of the west." said and bowed at them.
"So do we belong to you?" Kagome asked shyly. She would always expect to be punished for asking questions.
"In a way I suppose. But no one person can own another. Lets go." Offered an explanation and they walked away from the crowed market place.
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