Dons Magical Destabilization
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Main Character
First Name: Don
Last Name: Aaron
Middle Name: Eran
Age: 24
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Voice: Low & Distorted, Fear Filled Stutter
Mood: Unhappy, Sad, Afraid, Shaken, Broken, Shattered & Angry
Aura: Gray Static
Power: Bracelet of the Elements of Harmony
Hair Color: Short & Rainbow Colored, Short & Black with Streaks of White & Gray
Eye Color: Bright Glowing Sky Blue, Bright Glowing Gray
Height: 5.8 Feet
Weight: 182 Pounds
Dons Magical Destabilization Extended Summary
My name is Rainbow Dash, I'm the fastest Pegasus of all time. It's been almost a full year since Don left us. I'm slowly losing my hope that he'll return I can barely remember his face. Sometimes though I feel like he is still there all around me it makes me happy, but then I wake up and realize he is still gone. Don I hope I see you again one day because there is something lurking in the darkness outside these walls of Equestria. I saw it one time a few months ago I almost mistook it for you that is why I think I'm beginning to doubt myself. Please Don if your out there come back!
Prologue
The Void
Gates of Harmony
Remembrance, Realization
A Meaningful Confession and Warning
Time Passed Us By
Subspace: Fading Rippling Vanishing
Darkness filled the light deprived void that is subspace. Subspace is the single entity that connects the realms of our universe. Otherwise known as the Gates of Harmony. 'clever' Suddenly a few tiny specs of light made there presence known. Bright particles of rainbow magic materialized in the center of the void.
An unconscious Don drifted uncontrollably through the particles into Subspace. Don slowly opened his eyes revealing a pair of bright deep sky blue torn glowing eyes. Don could not feel anything all of his senses were shot, all he heard was silence, all he saw was darkness and he felt nothing well... Nothing except emptiness. The rainbow particles quickly fled spreading out in all directions as Don attempted to regain his senses.
"Where...where am I?" Don gulped heavily afraid of where he thought he might be. "Is... This... Hell? I expected it to be... A little warmer!" Don attempted to move his body but, he ultimately failed pathetically in his attempt. "Shit! What now? How did I even get here?" Don attempted to move his head to look around, but he was swiftly met with instant failure. "Actually a better question would be, where is here?"
Don sighed heavily. His sigh echoed throughout the empty god forsaken void his sigh quickly became his only friend. "I don't believe I'm in the realm of ponies anymore? It doesn't smell like my world... If it did I'd smell the fowl stench of something burning, blood would be thick in the air choking me! No this isn't my world! It's nicer, quieter, darker... Lonelier!" Don suddenly grew silent pondering the advantages of this realm. Don was unaware of the darkness crawling up his blue jeans.
Don now realized that he was utterly alone, it slowly began sinking in as did his fear of loneliness. "I need to get the heck out of here! I don't like it here?" Don stopped for a moment to gather his breath it was surprisingly difficult to speak, it was as if there was a heavy weight resting upon his lungs. "Still the question is where is here?" Don blinked his eyes rapidly trying to remember back to before. "That's right! I remember now!"
"Flashback"
The blazing sun shined down onto Itenza as he lied in a crater smoke rose around him, his vision was blurry. Itenza managed to see Don standing above him his thick rainbow aura crushing his senses. Don's mouth was moving and words weren't coming out. Itenza starred up to Don wanting to kill him, but mostly he wanted to ask him why. Don raised his right hand in front of Itenza's face who's eyes widened in fear.
Suddenly something came over Itenza he began to speak as a spiraling white ball of energy began forming in the palm of Don's right hand. Don's eyes slowly widened in amazement that Itenza could speak past the pain, past the blood, and through his overwhelming amount of power that he was pressing down upon Itenza.
"Don there's something you should know!" The spiraling white ball of energy and magic began moving slowly through the air towards Itenza. "Don the reason I wanted to destroy Equestria and kill you is because, I was ordered to or rather forced to, by a devastatingly powerful force! He had his cold grip of power controlling me until this moment!" Don's eyes widened in fear his entire body suddenly flinched doubting his previous decision.
The frighteningly dense white ball of spiraling magic began to explode in slow motion as light engulfed the both of them. Itenza continued to speak not wasting the little time he had left. "You freed me! Thank You! Don... I wish... you luck... protect all... of the... ones close... to you!" Itenza exploded into whiteness with a smile upon his face as rainbow rays of light shot into the sky. Don stood in the center of a hellish inferno of white flames luckily his thick rainbow aura protected him from the flames of death. Don clinched his fists tightly out of anger wishing he could've heard more as everything faded to blackness.
"Transitioning to a Vision"
The bracelet of the Elements of Harmony around Don's right wrist suddenly glowed and sparkled violently as the darkened once light deprived void began brightening up as light filled it to the brim. Don's eyes widened as his consciousness slipped away from him. Rainbow particles of magic from within his bracelet shot out all over Don's body pushing back the darkness that was trying to consume Don.
"Don! Where are you Don? Call out to me DON! I know your still alive!" A familiar comforting voice echoed throughout Don's mind. Suddenly Don's eyes shot open to find dust and smoke rising all around him. Violent shadows danced around Don as he pushed himself up off of the ground his vision was devastatingly blurry. Don attempted to whip his eyes clear, but he found himself unable.
Don could just barely make out six small figures through dust and smoke. "Is that... But it can't be!" Don's eyes widened to see six young ponies walking away from him as of they had no clue of his presence. Don tried to scream out to them he found his voice box was shot the sudden feeling that something or someone was gripping his throat.
Don slowly blinked his eyes once reopened he saw a frightening sight gripping his throat. A man made entirely of shuffling shadows held Don by the throat he lifted him up into the air. Don's eyes widened in fear he tried to resist but he quickly discovered that his entire body was going numb. The man of shadows starred into Don's bright gray eyes with his pair of glowing frighteningly bloody red demonic eyes.
"D..D...D..O...O..N!" Don's eyes widened wider in fear looking deep into the monstrously frightening figure of shadows every time his mouth opened pure redness leaked out as if it was blood. "I have come for your body and soul, but most all I want your power it is so appetizing to me... So delicious!" Don finally managed to speak.
"Never... I'll tell you the same thing I told Itenza... Do you think I'll just let you take it! I'll fight and I'll win just like I've done before!" The man of pure shadowy darkness squeezed on Don's neck nearly choking him into unconsciousness. "We'll see about that after all the cards are clearly in my favor." The man looked over through the smoke and dust as it cleared he eye'd a certain little colorful pony."
Don turned his head to see the six Elements of Harmony having fun and laughing competently oblivious of what was happening just a short distance away. A single tear drop fell from Don's face as he screamed. The man of shadows laughed manically as he lat go of Don slinging him up into the sky. Don began dematerializing into rainbow particles reverting back to pure magic. "NOOOOOOO!" The man of pure darkness with redened eyes and mouth starred at Don. "I will be waiting!" He said as everything faded to blackness once again.
"Flashback/Vision End"
Don still wondering aimlessly and uncontrollably through Subspace. Don blinked his eyes rapidly awakening from his nightmare. "Noooo!" He screamed loudly it echoed throughout Subspace rippling the darkness within. Don heaved heavily trying to regain his compuser and lost breath. Suddenly a cool breeze blew past him. Which was odd considering it was a void and there were no wind currents.
After for what seemed like an eternity of constant fear Don managed to regain some of his sanity. "...Don!" Suddenly a soft comforting pain filled voice wrapped itself around Don attempting to confort him. Don feverishly looked around the void seeing nothing, but at least he knew he wasn't deaf, he was just crazy.
"Don! DON! Help me! Don..." The voice echoed throughout the void. Don began trembling as a indescribable sensation over lapsed his senses. "What is this?" Don's eyes widened in fear. "What's happening?" Suddenly a heavy thick burning sensation shrouded Don's chest, specifically his heart. Don could feel his muscles reawakening. His entire body felt dangerously frighteningly numb like he'd been asleep for a thousand years. "Hang on whoever you are, I'm coming!" The Pendants of the Elements of Harmony that were eternally locked in place on Don's bracelet that comfortably rested around his right wrist began to glow and sparkle dimly.
Rainbow static slowly spread out from within the bracelet. Rainbow particles began flaking off of Don he began to dematerialize into nothingness. Don breathed heavily trying to cope with his fading existence slowly the rainbow static consumed Don's fading form and within seconds he disappeared into a flash of rainbow colored light...
"Dooooooooooooon..." A female scream echoed throughout the now empty lifeless barren void that is Subspace...
End of Prologue
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Chapter One
The Beginning
No Fare I Want Some
Begin the Search for Flowers
Suicide
Ponyvile: Celebration Party Anniversary
Ti's a bright hot day in the realm of ponies the sun shined down heavy rays of heat pounding down on a crowded town of Ponyvile. Ponies filled the streets frolicking about having a good time Princess Celestia was just about to step up at the podium and begin her announcement.
Ponies came from all over Equestria to celebrate the hero of time that saved Equestria from the brink of destruction. That hero was Don he's a human being with incredible powers, he wielded the Elements of Harmony and defeated the terrifying dragon that nearly destroyed everything and every pony. That dragon was Itenza if it weren't for Don we would've all died that day one year ago!
Well not exactly one year ago three hundred and sixty four days, twenty three hours and thirty one minutes ago to be exact. Anyway you get the picture here ponies come from all over to pay there respects to the brave man who gave his life for every pony. Pegasi filled the sky flying in every which way direction trying to get a good cloud to sit upon for a good view. Earth ponies lined the streets with there carts ready to sell you a house if you were buying. Most unicorns were still preparing for the party they were running behind waiting for some pony to show up.
Princess Celestia slowly turned her head looking through the heavy crowds trying, hoping and failing to spot her. "Damn it where are they? There gonna be late I'm already using spells to slow time down I can't stall for them any longer." Princess Celestia's ears bounced to the sound of hoof steps from behind she quickly turned around in the hopes of finding her behind. "Stall for who any longer?" Princess Cadenza asked as she licked on a long cold dripping wet ice pop it was bright blue. 'Emm!' "So good!"
Princess Celestia turned back towards the massive crowds of ponies. "I was hoping you were going t be Twilight Sparkle..." Princess Celestia sighed heavily in annoyance. "I can see she's going to be late again, I bet This is somehow her fault!" 'lick, lick, lick' "Who's fault I didn't do anything on accident without knowing it again, did I?" Princess Celestia rubbed her chin as she starred at Princess Cadenza with a funny look of contemplation on her face. "No! I don't think you did anything I've tried to keep an eye on you the hole time we've been here!" Princess Cadenza sighed a heavy sigh of relief. "Oh good cause I hate doing things I didn't even know I did!"
Canterlot: Specifically Twilight Sparkle's Bedroom
Twilight Sparkle raised her head out from underneath the covers her mane was a complete wreck if Rarity were here she'd flip out Twilight Sparkle's coat was in even worse shape than her mane. It appeared as if bubble gum was stuck on her back. Suddenly the covers rose up into the air levitating. The sound of wings flapping back and fourth could be heard from underway the thin blanket.
Suddenly the blanket was rolled up and tossed across the room. Rainbow Dash descended down onto Twilight Sparkle's bed gently landing next to her. 'yawn' "Ah! Twi what happened last night?" Twilight Sparkle had the sudden urge to vomit she quickly held her cheeks together tightly her face turned a slightly greenish color. Rainbow Dash quickly rolled over towards Twilight Sparkle looking up to her as Rainbow Dash lied on her back. "Umm... Twi are you OK?"
Twilight Sparkle shook her head slowly before she managed to swallow down the whatever it was that was in her mouth. 'burp' Rainbow Dash quickly backed away from Twilight Sparkle as a fowl stench loomed over her consuming her sense of smell completely destroying her nose. "Ahh yuck! Twilight what the heck did you have last night?" Twilight Sparkle scratched her chin. "Hmm... Well I had a bunch of your moms cookies, few of your dads sandwiches and one or two servings of Cadenza's famous salads."
Rainbow Dash backed away even further from Twilight Sparkle she pinched her nose tightly. "No! No! It couldn't have been any of that... Well hold on a second my dads sandwiches are totally gross, but I don't think there that gross! What'd you have to drink?" Twilight Sparkle reached over the side of the bed pulling up an empty mug off of the floor almost instantly the smell of alcohol filled the air with it's intoxicating scent. Rainbow Dash starred at the mug. "Ooooo! Twi your in big trouble when I tell Celestia you drank some of Applejack's apple cider!"
"Oh please Rainbow Dash don't tell! I didn't really mean to you brought some of those spicy chips and I really needed something to drink so I found it in the fridge!" Rainbow Dash crisscrossed her hooves. "OK! Twi I won't tell if you won't, but I want some apple coder too!" Twilight Sparkle's eyes widened in absolute fear. "Umm... OK! Rainbow Dash, but there's one problem I drank the last little bit all that was in the fridge is gone now." Rainbow Dash mouth hit the bed. 'Aww' "Shoot I really want to try some!" Twilight Sparkle firmly pressed her hoof against her head trying to ignore the massive throbbing headache she was experiencing right about now.
"Rainbow Dash trust me you wont like it! If you won't though we can stop by Applejack's today and ask her if she can sneak us some." Rainbow Dash's eyes widened in joy. "Really you mean it!" Twilight Sparkle leaped out of bed still nursing her pounding forehead. "Yeah... Sure... It's no problem, I gotta stop in Ponyvile today Princess Celestia wants me to be there for Don's thingy!" Rainbow Dash scratched her head as she starred at the grandfather clock that was standing tall against the wall just across Twilight Sparkle's big room. "Oh yeah that... What time was that again?" Twilight Sparkle slowly trotted into the bathroom looking a little wobbly as she attempted to hold down her late night snacks and maintain her balance she seemed a bit dizzy.
"It's going to go down around seven!" Rainbow Dash eyes widened she eye'd the grandfather clock. "Umm... Twi..." 'SssssSsssS' Suddenly the sound of running water could be heard coming from within the bathroom. Rainbow Dash leaped out of bed and approached the now closed bathroom door steam slowly drifted out from underneath the door crack. Rainbow Dash gulped heavily before she sighed she reached out with her front right hoof with it she gently pushed the door open. Steam hot heavy steam slapped her in the face as the door opened wide.
Rainbow Dash dashed inside the steam filled bathroom her eyes widened in absolute surprise. "Umm... Uhhh... Twilight what are you doing?" Twilight Sparkle leaned over the bathroom sink and spat in it. "I'm brushing my teeth seeing how you were complaining about my bad breath." Rainbow Dash looked around the bathroom with heavy confusion evident upon her face. "Bu...but where did all this steam come from?" Twilight looked around the bathroom as she put away her toothbrush. "I don't know? Anyway get out so I can take a bath." Twilight Sparkle's horn glowed Rainbow Dash was suddenly engulfed in her magic she rose into the air levitating there for a moment.
Twilight Sparkle slowly moved Rainbow Dash through the air towards the bathroom door. "Wait... Wait Twilight you better hurry cause it's like six fifty five!" Twilight Sparkle's eyes widened in fear Rainbow Dash suddenly fell to the grounds outside the bathroom door that suddenly slammed shut in her face. The sound of the shower running quite loudly echoed throughout the nearly empty castle. Rainbow Dash lied upside down nursing her new headache. "Ahh! Dang it Twi!"
The EverFree Forest: Boarders
Applejack and Fluttershy slowly trotted into the EverFree forest. "Applejack are you... Uhh... sure it's safe?" "Are you kidding... Of course it isn't safe we gotta be careful, but you need your special plant and I need mine so we ain't got no choice!" Fluttershy instantaneously zipped out of the forest in a blinding rage filled with fear. Applejack sighed heavily. "Come on Fluttershy we can do this I was gonna wait for Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash, but I ain't got no time for ponies who are always trotting late!"
"Are you... Umm sure we can't wait just one more minute?" Applejack rolled her eyes as she trotted out of the forest. "I guess we can wait here for one minute." Applejack fell back on her but next to Fluttershy who was curled up in a ball starring at the forest her extreme paranoia would surely get the best of her on this little adventure. "I hope they make it in time!" Suddenly a sweat scent drifted past Applejack's tiny nose it bounced to the scent of freshly made cupcakes.
"I recognize that scent! Emm... Pinky is nearby!" Applejack bounced up not wanting to sit still for two seconds she's always gotta do something productive. "PINKY! Is that you Pie?" "We're over here AJ!" Applejack turned her head slowly to see Rarity and Pinky Pie trotting towards them. "Hey I didn't think yah'll would show!" Rarity stopped next to Applejack. "Are you kidding we wouldn't miss this for the world, although I am suppose to be making my mother a new coat, however that can wait a girl's gotta make time for her friends!"
Rarity looked down to Fluttershy cowering in the dirt. "Ah! Fluttershy you absolutely must get out of the dirt my deer your getting your coat dirty!" Fluttershy slowly rose up off the ground. "Hello Rarity how have you been?" Rarity sighed heavily. "Oh well you know the usual, I'm still working on that same dress from last month I just can't quite get the threading correctly stitched!" Fluttershy starred at Rarity. "What about that design I gave you a few months ago?" Rarity's eyes widened. "Oh that thing I finished that it was nothing, but Fluttershy who's it for? It doesn't look like it's for a pony?" Fluttershy looked into the sky the bright sun shined down to her. "It's not meant for ponies!"
Pinky Pie threw a cupcake at Applejack. Applejack leaped into the air she opened her mouth wide and swallowed it whole. Applejack quickly spun around in mid air she landed on her two back hooves. "Yeehaa! That was a good cupcake Pinky your getting much better!" Pinky Pie approached Applejack with the basket of cupcakes in her mouth. Then suddenly Pinky Pie opened her mouth wide to speak. "Thanks Applejack! I put all of my soul into this batch!" Applejack's eyes widened in absolute fear her eyes watered as she watched the basket filled with Pinky Pie's delicious cupcakes slowly fall to the ground. "Noooooo! Pinky!" Applejack screamed.
Suddenly sparkling magic engulfed the basket stopping it in mid air. Applejack and Pinky Pie turned to see Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash a few yards away trotting up the hill towards them. "Applejack smiled widely happy she saved Pinky Pie's cupcakes, oh so delicious. Rainbow Dash looked over to Twilight Sparkle. "Hey nice save Twi!" Twilight Sparkle pulled the basket filled with cupcakes towards her. "It was nothing, want a cupcake?" Twilight Sparkle shoved a cupcake with rainbow sprinkles on top of the icing in Rainbow Dash's face. "Umm... No thanks Twilight... I don't like cupcakes I prefer cookies!" Twilight Sparkle blinked her eyes rapidly. "Well OK then!"
Applejack and Pinky Pie approached Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle. Rarity and Fluttershy quickly followed suit all six ponies were now together again it had been seven months since they last converged together. The pressure in the air was thick with power. There destiny was rightfully upon them as the Elements of Harmony to be, stood face to face. "OK! See you all later then..." Every ponies eyes widened in surprise. Applejack charged up behind Twilight Sparkle. "Wait where are you going aren't you going into the EverFree forest with us?" Twilight Sparkle slowly turned to Applejack with a look of sadness on her face. "I'm so sorry Applejack, but Princess Celestia wanted to speak with me, it's bad enough I'm already late." Twilight Sparkle dropped the basket of cupcakes in Pinky Pie's hooves. Rainbow Dash turned to Twilight Sparkle. "See you later then!" Twilight Sparkle began trotting away. "Yep later Rainbow Dash!"
Rainbow Dash turned to Applejack and the rest of the gang who were just starring at her with a funny look on all of there faces. "Umm... What? Is there something on my face?" Applejack shook her head clearing her dirty thoughts. "Uhh... It's nothing! Now come one Rainbow Dash let's go in." Rainbow Dash starred at the creepy forest although the sunlight was out she still couldn't shake this feeling of fear in her stomach. "Whoa... Whoa! Wait what are we going in there to get again?"
Every pony looked around to each other for a moment. Applejack starred at Rainbow Dash. "Well I need to get some flowers for this year's Zap apple harvest so we can complete the Zap apple jam!" Fluttershy stood up and trotted beside Rainbow Dash. "I uhh... Need to umm... Get some oriental poppy's and a few celle lilly's!" Rarity approached Rainbow Dash from behind. "I need to acquire a few dragons spirals." Every pony immediately turned to Pinky Pie awaiting to see if she had to find anything in particular in the forest.
Rainbow Dash began sweating. Applejack looked at Pinky Pie as she stuffed her face full of cupcakes. "We'll Pinky what are you after?" 'nom, nom, nom' "Oh so good I've really out done myself these are the best cupcakes I've ever made!" Applejack's eyes twitched in annoyance. "Pinky! We're waiting!" 'nom, nom' "Sorry I'm not after anything, I'm just coming along for the ride." Fluttershy approached Pinky Pie. "Umm... You know you don't have to come if you don't want to." Pinky Pie tossed the empty basket that was filled with cupcakes into the wind. "Are you kidding I want to go! I've heard the stories about this place there's suppose to be a bunch of huge scary monsters that lurk within the shadows around every tree just waiting to gobble a pony up in one swift gulp!"
Rarity turned to Rainbow Dash only to find her hugging the ground trembling heavily sweat covered her face. "Umm... Rainbow Dash are you alright?" Rainbow Dash closed her eyes thinking back to years ago. Applejack, Pinky Pie and Fluttershy gathered around Rainbow Dash as the little filly cowarded in fear on the ground. "No! I'm not!"
"Flashback"
Rainbow Dash stepped away from the Mendacore's that grew closer and closer by the second. Rainbow Dash's heart pounded heavily about to burst out of her chest. Her eyes widened as one of the creatures with frighteningly sharp claws lunged for her. Rainbow Dash quickly closed her eyes she fell to the ground cowering in fear wishing the monster would just disappear.
Suddenly screams filled the air followed by the scent of freshly drawn blood. Rainbow Dash slowly opened her eyes she looked up to see Don standing above her blood dripped from his hands. 'drip, drip, drip' Blood dripped on Rainbow Dash's nose she began trembling heavier than before as Don slowly turned to look her dead in the eye.
Don's eyes were bright bloody frightening red. Rainbow Dash's heart sped up to the demonic sight of Don's eyes. However his soft blue aura that consumed Don's being filled her with sweat relief. Don opened his mouth to speak. "Don't worry Rainbow Dash I'll get us out of here!" Rainbow Dash managed to nod in agreement. Don turned back facing the ferocious monster he suddenly leaped foreword towards them.
"Transitioning to a Dream"
Rainbow Dash's eyes shot open she found herself on a soft warm surface. Rainbow Dash looked down to find Don underneath her, she smiled to the sight of him as he lied on the ground relaxing it appeared as if they were in a beautiful endless garden filled with flowers butterflys flew gently with the wind birds flew high in the empty cloudless sky. Suddenly Don spoke. "Rainbow Dash are you afraid? Are you sad? Are you angry... Angry at me?" Rainbow Dash's eyes widened her mouth opened she attempted to speak. "Yes... Yes... And Yes! I'm afraid cause your not here, I'm sad because your gone, I'm angry cause your not with me here... But I'm mostly angry at myself!"
Don's eyes widened in surprise he slowly pushed himself off of his back sitting upwards he pulled Rainbow Dash into his arms holding her gently. "Any anger you have pour it on me, I'll bare your pain, sadness, hate and fear... I'll take it and make it my strength to protect you! To protect everything and everyone..." Don chuckled lightly. "I mean every pony..."
Rainbow Dash looked up to Don out of his chest. "B..bu...but Don y..yo...you...your dead!" Tears slowly ran down Rainbow Dash's face. Don lifted Rainbow Dash's chin upwards, Rainbow Dash starred into Don's bright glowing blue eyes. "I promise to you Rainbow Dash that I will find my way back!" Don whipped her eyes clear. "Now go be with your friends have fun just know that I will protect!" Rainbow Dash's eyes widened as Don began fading away into nothingness her surroundings brightened brighter and brighter everything began fading to white.
"Flashback/Dream End"
"DOOOOOON!" Rainbow Dash suddenly sat up screaming loudly. Applejack, Pinky Pie, Fluttershy and Rarity starred at Rainbow Dash with there mouths hung agape in complete and total confusion. Applejack watched as tears slowly slid down her face. Rainbow Dash looked around in every direction as if she was looking for something. "What Don where... Come back!" Applejack trotted in front of Rainbow Dash. "Dash are you alright?" Applejack asked in a low comforting and accepting tone.
Rainbow Dash starred Applejack in the eyes. Rarity slowly trotted beside of Rainbow Dash she pulled out a handkerchief and whipped her eyes clear. "What was that just now?" She asked as Rainbow Dash looked up to Rarity. "Umm... Nothing?" Applejack chuckled lightly as she sat down on her butt. "It didn't sound like nothing... Do you wanna talk about it?" Rainbow Dash shook her head back and fourth while slinging her hooves through the air. "Nope, no, no! No! I'm fine now let's go into the forest and get your flowers!"
Fluttershy and Pinky Pie blinked there eyes rapidly concerned filled there hearts as there minds wondered if Rainbow Dash was OK. Rainbow Dash suddenly bounced up off of the ground she trotted past the gang and moved towards the forest. She stopped in front of the tree's shadows. Rainbow Dash gulped as she starred into the bright deep colorful thick forest filled with who knows what, she suddenly turned her head towards the others. "You all coming, or not?"
Ponyvile: Town Center Stage Podium
Twilight Sparkle appeared before Princess Celestia who starred down to her with an angry annoyed look on her face. "Your late!" Twilight Sparkle gulped heavily. "I know I'm sorry!" "What were you doing?" "I had to drop Rainbow Dash off with the others, but I'm here now what's up?" Princess Celestia sighed heavily. "No matter Twilight I need you to..." 'BooooooooooooooooooM!' "Run! Run! Run!" Some ponies yelled. "Scatter!" One or two pegasi screamed from above as flaming chunks of debris fell from the sky. "Get away quickly it's gonna explode!" One unicorn said as she hid underneath of a table.
Twilight Sparkle starred over the edge of the stage watching as frightened ponies ran back and fourth through the streets attempting to dodge falling chunks of flaming pieces of wood. Pegasi frantically flew through the air trying to gather rain clouds to extinguish the flames that suddenly sparked as if from out of nowhere. Princess Celestia's eyes widened in fear realizing where the smoke was coming from.
Twilight Sparkle looked up to Princess Celestia. Princess Cadenza stepped up behind Princess Celestia. "Oh no! That's Rainbow Dash's house!" Princess Celestia was about to leap into the air when suddenly Shining Armor descended down to her. "Princess! I have very important tragic news!" Princess Celestia turned to Shining Armor with a fearful look on her face. "What... What is it, I don't have time for this!"
Shining Armor sighed heavily. "Princess Celestia Raider the former leader of the royal guard is dead!" Princess Celestia, Princess Cadenza and Twilight Sparkle's eyes widened in fear as they all turned to Shining Armor the look of disbelief written all up there faces. "How? Shining Armor tell me who did it?" Princess Celestia clinched her teeth heavily awaiting his response.
"Princess Celestia... Raider killed himself!" Princess Celestia's eyes widened in absolute fear confusion dawned down upon her face. Suddenly Princess Cadenza slammed her front right hoof into Shining Armor's face sending him flying into the air spiraling backwards uncontrollably through the sky. Princess Celestia fell back on her butt she was still stunned by what was happening around her. Twilight Sparkle looked back and fourth from Princess Celestia to Princess Cadenza to Shining Armor then to the rising smoke in the distance.
Twilight Sparkle looked up to Celestia with a distraught look on her face. "Princess Celestia what did you want to tell me?" Princess Celestia slowly stood up on all four hooves she sighed heavily before spreading her wings. "I'm so sorry Twilight Sparkle it'll have to wait, I'm going to go see what has happened over there, you take care of your brother make sure he's still alive!" Twilight Sparkle nodded in agreement as Princess Celestia leaped into the air.
Princess Celestia flew over the skies of Ponyvile the blazing sun beat down on top of her head the thick smoke choked her it almost seemed magic induced. Princess Celestia landed on the ground ponies, unicorns and pegasi gathered around her as she approached the house that lied in rubble. 'Snap! Crack!' Princess Celestia looked down to see she's stepped on a sign it read. "Colarine's Bakery" Princess Celestia's eyes widened in terrifying fear. "Oh no!"
Princess Celestia's unicorn horn glowed and sparkled violently suddenly her magic engulfed the decimated obliterated house that lied in pieces. Large chunks of debris rose into the air. Princess Celestia slowly trotted inside the remains of the house. "COLARINE! WHIP WLASH! HELLO ANY PONY HOME!" Princess Celestia began sweating heavily. "No! NO!" Some ponies that gathered around quickly charged inside the house that was rather large. Colarine's Bakery was a two story house with a basement.
Earth ponies spread out and searched the first floor, pegasi quickly flew upstairs searching the mostly destroyed second floor. A few unicorns slowly trotted downstairs into the basement the sealing above them was cracked and crumbling away it wouldn't hold out for long. Princess Celestia's eyes watered in anger she was losing her focus rather quickly. Suddenly Princess Celestia heard the faint sound of pain filled moaning in the distance. Princess Celestia eyes widened the sound was coming from the basement.
Outskirts of Ponyvile: Painful Skies
"How dare you! Raider would never do that to himself he was a good pony, he just... he just couldn't..." Shining Armor's eyes widened as tears ran down Princess Cadenza's face. Twilight Sparkle hovered in mid air between the two she turned to Shining Armor with a look of confusion evident on her face. "Brother what exactly happened to Raider?"
Shining Armor sighed heavily. "I'm sorry Twi I can't tell you! Your far too young for this brutal tragic scene." Two guardians hovered beside of Shining Armor as he rubbed his bleeding cheek it still ached heavily from were Princess Celestia right hoofed him. "Geez! Princess Cadenza you've got one hell of a right hoof!" Shining Armor managed to chuckle lightly despite the scent of death was thick in the air.
Princess Cadenza began descending to the ground. "I can't believe it, I don't believe it, I won't believe it until I see it for myself!" Princess Cadenza gulped heavily she starred up to Shining Armor through her watery eyes with a deeply angered expression plainly evident upon her face. "Take me to Raider! Now!" She demanded in a ruthless tone. Twilight Sparkle continued to hover in mid air she looked around in all directions a familiar presence loomed over her. "What is this presence, this power, this hate!"
Shining Armor sighed heavily he looked to his right and left. "OK you two go offer any and all assistance to Princess Celestia I'll escort Princess Cadenza to Raider's location!" Both of the guardians nodded before disappearing into thin air. Shining Armor starred Princess Cadenza down an annoyed look clearly visible on his face. "Let's go!" Princess Cadenza spread her wings and jolted into the air.
Twilight Sparkle slowly descended to the ground as Princess Cadenza and Shining Armor took off at full speed towards the EverFree Forest. Twilight Sparkle's eyes widened in fear. "Oh my Celestia!" Twilight Sparkle's horn glowed and sparkled suddenly her magic spread out all over her body she disappeared into a flash of light teleporting away into the wind. Shadows crept underneath the trees at the edge of the EverFree Forest.
Ponyvile: Colarine's Bakery... Well what's left of it anyway!
Princess Celestia charged downstairs as little pieces of rubble fell around her the ground began shaking lightly. "I have to hurry or I'll never forgive myself!" Princess Celestia stood in the center of the basement blood covered the floor Princess Celestia gulped heavily she looked around fear plainly evident in her eyes. "Princess... Celestia... over... here...!" Colarine lied underneath a pile of rubble. Princess Celestia instantaneously dashed over to her. Princess Celestia's horn glowed and sparked violently all of the rocks and broken planks as well as a few boxes of cookie dough that crushed Colarine ascended into the air.
Colarine attempted to push herself off of the ground however she failed miserably blood slowly ran down her neck. The sealing above them began cracking heavily as the ground shook violently. "It's no use I can't move save yourself Princess!" Princess Celestia's eyes widened in fear and annoyance. "NO! I'm not going to leave you I'll die with you if that's what it takes, besides Rainbow Dash would be upset if she found out her mother was dead!" Princess Celestia suddenly slung the debris over into a corner she instantly consumed Colarine with her magic lifting her into the air. Princess Celestia began sweating heavily as the sealing slowly collapsed down around her she closed her eyes trying to muster the energy required to teleport.
The two guardians stood outside the house as pegasi and earth ponies quickly scattered in all directions the house collapsed in on itself. The guardians eyes widened in absolute fear. "PRINCESS!" The sound of large wings flapping in the distance echoed through the sky. "Are you all looking for something!" Every ponies eyes widened in joy they all starred up into the sky.
Whip Wlash slowly descend to the ground somehow he was holding his wife Colarine and Princess Celestia in his hooves. The two guardians quickly jumped over to him to offer there assistance. "Let us help you!" The guardians pulled Princess Celestia close she was unconscious. Whip Wlash held Colarine in his hooves tightly she was unconscious and bleeding badly. "Damn it if only I'd been faster! Rainbow Dash was right I am getting old! I'm getting slow!"
Whip Wlash's mane glowed brightly a golden color illuminating Colarine and all of the ponies around him. Whip Wlash looked over to the two guardians as he powered up. "You two come with me to Cloudsdale Hospital bring the Princess!" They both looked to one another in a confused state. "How we can not move her in her current condition!" Whip Wlash sighed heavily. "Hold onto her tightly and grab ahold of me!"
"OK! But what is this going to do?" Luckily for Whip Wlash they'd already grabbed on to him so he didn't reply. Suddenly Princess Celestia, Colarine, Whip Wlash and the two guardians disappeared into thin air every ponies eyes widened in absolute surprise. The space where they'd once resided rippled heavily as tiny sparkles covered the ground.
The EverFree Forest: Raider's Crime Scene
Shining Armor and Princess Cadenza slowly trotted into an abandoned house in the dead center of the frighteningly massive EverFree Forest filled with terrifying monsters. Blood covered the floors and walls hell it was dripping from the fucking sealing. Princess Cadenza closed her eyes in a sudden panic. "Oh my gosh! I can't believe it!" Princess Cadenza quickly held her mouth shut tightly trying not to vomit as the furious fowl smelling stench of death poured into Princess Cadenza's nostrils nearly choking her.
Shining Armor slowly trotted over top of the bloody floor over towards Raider's body that was covered with a blanket that was once pure white, but is now soaking red. "Well Princess this is what you wanted step up to the plate and claim your prize... The truth that Raider killed himself!" Shining Armor quickly pulled the covers off of Raider's corpse. Princess Cadenza's and Shining Armor's eyes widened in fear and joy!
Outskirts of Equestria: (a.k.a) Itenza's Lair
Itenza reappeared inside his man cave that suddenly brightened to his presence revealing its vastness. Hundreds of pathways, dozens of rooms, multiple shafts leading upwards. Itenza sat down a jar on a table in the center of the main room. Rainbow colored light began shining illuminating Itenza's eyes. "Finally!" Itenza reached down underneath of the table and pulled up a jar filled with black static that was violently twisting and turning in all directions trying to get free but it was failing. "Now to begin!"
End of Chapter One
Chapter Completion Date: 8\01\12
( I really hope and pray that you all liked this! Please Leave a Review with your opoinon, I'm litterally dying to hear it! Please tell me your thoughts. I had some help from my staff on YouTube so yeah Thanks Beth! I know I said before I wasn't gonna write or even think about writing anymore for a long time... bu..but I don't know I just couldn't stop myself. I Love this Chapter I hope you do too! I have found some temporaly inspiration so I can continue writing until it burns out. Well that's pretty much it! If you have any questions just ask me or leave a review cause reading your reviews makes me happy! Feel free to talk about my story on Facebook or Twitter again Thanks So Much for Reading I Love You All So Much!
By the way here are my age conclusions for my story. Enjoy! The slash with numbers is like halves or thirds of a year so yeah have fun!
"Don 24"
"Rainbow Dash 9, 4\5"
"Twilight Sparkle 10, 1\2"
"Applejack 9, 1\2"
"Pinky Pie 8, 3\4"
"Fluttershy 10, 3\4"
"Rarity 10, 1\4"
"Princess Celestia 4274, 3\5"
"Princess Cadenza 25, 1\3"
"Shining Armor 22, 2\4"
"Colarine 38, 3\5"
"Whip Wlash 40, 2\4"
"Spitfire 20, 1\4"
"Soarin 21, 2\3"
"Vinyl 9, 4\5"
"Derpy 11, 1\5"
"Raider 46, 5\6 R.i.P"
"Itenza 11293, 4\5"
"The Shadowy Darkness Within 24"
There I hope you all enjoy my listings of there age groups for MLP FiM FanFiction DMD please note these do not apply for DMS let me make that clear they do not apply. By the way if you haven't guessed this is a sequel so yah!