The smell of twisted metal and smoke was overwhelming as I felt the horrible sense of déjà vu. In the background I could hear the faint sound of someone yelling "Rose, Rose wake up!" slowly I tried to open my eyes but my stupid brain had other ideas No just stay here and sleep it thought over and over again. Finally I made enough willpower to slowly open my eyes to find myself being pinned down by what I thought was the roof of a car. "Uggghhhh" I moaned quietly as I felt a sharp stab of pain radiating through my arm. Finally realizing what had happened I shakily stood up to find two girls about my age and a man and a women from the first look I could tell they were all dead. Feeling the realization sink in once again I knew that these people were my family. After maneuvering myself out of all the bodies and ruble I found myself in a forest I could smell the pine needle almost as much as the smell of the burning metal. AS slow as a snail I tried to wake my brain up and tried to think of something to do finally I decided to look for help for what seemed like hours I wondered around trying to find some sort of help, Finally I saw a small cabin with smoke coming out of its chimney. "Help, Help!" I yelled. After a few seconds a women ran out wearing a pretty little nightgown and little pink slippers. Back then I would have said wow she sure is pretty but that was before I saw something red streaming down her lips. Instantly I knew something was up. Before I could get a better look at it she had quickly wiped it away. "Oh you poor child! What has happened to you? You poor, poor child come on in a have a drink of tea." Fast as a buzzing bee the women had me inside sitting in a nice comfy chair with a hot cup of tea in my hand. Thinking Why the heck am I drinking tea from a women that I don't even know All the while the women was staring down at with me with the biggest smile I had ever seen slowly the women raised a hand and gently tucked a blood smeared piece of hair behind my ear. " Now that you have finished your tea and is way more comfy please tell me what happened." she said. Slowly I shook my head. As fast as a snake the women sent a hard slap across my face. " DO NOT TREAT ME THAT WAY YOUNG LADY I ASKED A QUESTION AND YOU BETTER ANSWER IT!" Slowly I shook my head once more and before I had time to react the women had a hand in my hair and was pinning me up against the wall. "Fine be that way." she said. Slowly she put her lips to my throat and bit down a loud gasp escaped my lips as pain went through my neck but as fast as it had come it was gone replaced by a pleasure so sweet it almost made me faint. Then in the distance I a loud beeping was ringing in my ears. "beep, beep, Beep, Beep, BEEP, BEEP, BEEP!" but now the noise was so loud I couldn't ignore it then it all came back to me. I was in bed. Sleeping. Dreaming. None of it was real. WHAM I burst up front my nightmare covered in sweat. "It's okay, It's okay." I mumbled to myself. it's was just a dream...Boy, was I wrong.

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