Fan Fic Details :

Timeline :

Post GT seven years after Goku's departure excluding the last scene of DB GT

My assumptions :

Goku=Kakarot Dead Other World 100 years Dragon Balls inside him

Vegeta=Prince Vegeta Earth 107 years

Piccolo Dead hell

Tien,Yamch,Chaouzu,Krillin Earth

Gohan,Videl Earth 85 and 83 years

Goten and Trunks Earth 70 and 71 years

Goku Jr. Vegeta Jr. Earth 20 years each

Pan Dead Heaven

Chi-Chi,Bulma Dead Heaven

Master Roshi Earth 150 years (Alive due to meditation)

Android 18 Dead Heaven

DRAGON BALL CRISIS

Chp 1 : The Arrival of Raditz (II)

(Standing above the Earth, on a white circulr platform a small green creature dressed in white and red

robes and with antennas had a shell shocked expression on his face. Behind him a short black man with

a white turban ran upto him and said.)

Mr. Popo : What in Kami's name is that?

Dende : I have never felt such a power before.

Mr. Popo : Is it stronger than Vegeta and even Gohan?

Dende : It definitely is.

(In the other world Kakarot was distratcted form his training. He as well could not believe what he was

sensing.)

Kakarot : Could it really be him?

(Back on Earth Gohan,Goten and Trunks had flet the power and were flying towards the location. For some reason

the huge power had stopped moving and was waiting in one place as if anticipating the arrival of someone.

Meanwhile somewhere in hell Piccolo banged his hands on the ground.)

Piccolo : How is it that he is still alive and how the blazes did he become so powerful. It just doesnt make

sense?

(Prince Vegeta was busy training in the new and improved hyperbolic time chamber. He could not sense this huge power

and was oblivious to the events on Earth.)

Dende : Do you think we should summon Prince Vegeta Mr. Popo?

Mr. Popo : I think we should let Gohan handle it.

(On Master Roshi's Island Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. were training with Tien,Chaouzu,Yamcha and Krillin. Although

they could sense this huge power, all of them knew they wouldnt stand a chance against it)

(Finally, Gohan,Goten and Trunks reach the huge powers location they could not see who it was from a distacne

so they flew nearer to the huge power. When they saw who it was Goten and Trunks didnt recognize who it was

but he had a very familiar appearance. As for Gohan he was as shocked as Kakarot and Piccolo. This person was

taller than Prince Vegeta, had long brown hair and a tail. With a coarse voice the person smiled and said)

Raditz : Did u miss me Gohan ?

[End of chapter 1. P.S. This is my first Fan Fic so be a little kind an the criticisms although they are welcome.

Next chapter " The new and improved Raditz "

Please comment away.]