Ahem, hey everyone! I've rewritten a story! Wow, who knew I'd actually get off my lazy butt and fix up a crappy story instead of just deleting it. I was going to delete the original, but people seemed to like it a lot so I left it. Just recently I was thinking about it. I knew it was crap, as in, bad grammer, too short, charaters WAY too OOC, and just the plain old fact that everyone knda overeacted. REALLY overeacted. So, I decided to re-write it. Here ya go:


They'll pay… Pay for making fun of me… They all mocked me is Melee, but Brawl's here and I'll show them! I'll show them all!

Yes. Just wait.

They'll regret what they said to me…


"Mario wins! As he moves up in the tournament, the next match will be Kirby vs Captain Falcon!" The announcer, Master hand, said.

"Prepare to be pwn'd, puffball." Capt. Falcon said. Kirby rolled his eyes. The two smashers entered their teleporters, and were warped to the stage.

"3!" The stage was Pokemon Stadium 2, chosen out of random.

"2!" Capt Falcon arrived in his car and Kirby crashed onto the stage.

"1!" The two got ready to fight as smashers at the mansion watched eagerly.

"GO!" Captain Falcon started out with a Falcon kick that Kirby sidestepped.

"Who do you think will win?" Pit said as he watched the TV screen in the living room.

"Captain Falcon. I don't think Kirby'll win." Link said.

"Why not?" Pit said.

"Kirby isn't that good of a fighter. I doubt he's gotten any better since Melee." Link said. The two continued watching.

Kirby sidestepped a Falcon Punch, and grabbed him. He jumped up high and slammed Capt. Falcon down hard, causing a small explosion. Capt. Falcon retaliated with a few good kicks and sent the puffball flying with a side smash. Kirby got back on the stage, and dodged another attack. The puffball dashed and spun on his hands/paws/things, landing multiple hits on Capt. Falcon. Before the captain could retaliate, Kirby grabbed him, launched him, and side smashed Falcon before he could recover, giving Kirby the win.

Link spat out his drink. "What the heck? How-?"

"I thought you said Kirby was weak." Pit said.

"He is!" Link said.

"It was probably just dumb luck." Marth said and flicked his hair.

"I guess so." Link said.


The next day…

"And Luigi wins that tough match! Will he make it any farther?"

"HEY!"

"The next match is, Mario vs Kirby!"

"AKA, the Grand Fireball vs the Pink Puffy Puff!" Crazy hand said.

"Shut up!" Master hand could be heard scolding his brother for that. Either way, Kirby didn't appreciate the insult. As the two smashers approached their teleporters, Mario said, "Good luck, Kirby!" Kirby growled at Mario. Clearly Kirby was angry about what Crazy hand said. They stepped on the teleporter and were transported to the stage.

"3!" Mario jumped out of his pipe cheerfully. He always liked tournaments.

"2!" Kirby jumped off his warpstar instead off crashing with it.

"1!" Mario looked around and saw that they were on the Rainbow Cruise stage. One of his favorites.

"GO!" Mario rushed at Kirby, and the puffball rushed at him. He sidestepped Kirby's hammer, and side smashed him. He jumped when Kirby did his cutter attack, dodging the sword. Kirby jumped up and Mario fell through the platform. But Kirby was back on the main part of the ship, and he grabbed Mario. He threw the plumber down and stepped on him repeatedly. He grabbed Mario again and threw him back. The plumber just barely avoided the stone Kirby turned himself into.

The ship had finally reached the other platforms, and started to fall. Mario jumped, dodging Kirby's attacks as he went. He waited for the perfect moment to strike the puffball but never got it. Kirby had gotten tired of all of Mario's dodging and threw his hammer at Mario. The plumber never expected that, and was sent flying.

Kirby taunted, "Bye!" instead of saying his usual, "Hi!"

"Game!" Everyone at the mansion was shocked.

"Is it legal for Kirby to throw his hammer like that?!" Marth said.

"You threw your sword at me before." Pit said.

"Kirby never fought like this in Melee." Link said.

"Maybe Kirby's been holding back?" Fox said.

"I don't think so. Why would he purposely lose all those times in Melee?" Link said.

"I don't get what the big deal is." Pit said.

"You weren't there, Kirby SUCKED back then." Wolf said.

"You weren't their either!" Pit said.

"Maybe not but I've seen a lot of his matches. He was terrible." Wolf said.

"Yeah, kinda an easy opponent." Marth said.

"Hey, you've fought Kirby before. About 2 weeks before the tournament, in one of the daily chosen matches right?" Fox said. Pit nodded.

"Well? How tough was he?" Fox said.

"Uh… oh wow you guys are right. I got him 4 times in the one match!" Pit said. "But it's not really nice to say those things about him…"

"Whatever, he's still terrible." Wolf said.


They still doubt me? Heh, well they'll pay… They'll pay when beg for mercy between my claws. They'll scream when their blood is in my jaws.

They'll regret! The puffball kicked the sandbag.

They'll pay! He kicked it harder.

They'll beg! The sandbag flew across the room.

They'll beg me for mercy as I rip them apart! I'm not taking it easy anymore!

THEY'LL REGRET EVERY INSULT THEY EVER SAID TO ME!

The puffball left the training room, leaving only scraps of the sandbag.


Le gasp! What's this?! Actual fight scenes?! Yep! I used to suck at fight scenes so I never put them in my stories. I still suck at fight scenes, but not as badly anymore. Look, doesn't the first chapter seem a HECK of a lot more serious than the first chapter of the original? That's how much better I've gotten at this junk! Okay, that's enough about the orginal story. Hope you liked this chapter, next one is due tomorrow at around 4:00! Just giving you a heads up. Bye for now!