Hi guys I know that you guys hope this is a new chapter. Sorry if I had not update in so long! Anyways, I'm going to say this, I loathe the story. So, I am going to re-write it. Please bear with me!
Chapter 1:
Flashback:
Percy's PoV:
As I saw Annabeth snuggling with a new child of Zeus, Zane, I was mortified. Anger flooded my veins as the sea shook, ground rumbles and the air becomes thick with condensation. I was amazed, by this new strength I found in me. It made me calm down somewhat. However, when I saw Annabeth ignoring all these when campers were shouting and screaming, I got angrier. Then, this crazy idea entered my mind. I formed water vapor into a shape of an arrow. Then I shoot it through Annabeth's leg. A piercing scream sounded through the air. When Annabeth's face turned towards me, I turned my face stone again. With a cold voice I said, "This is my final gift to you. If I keep it, it gives me pain. Take it, and leave me alone from now to all time." Then I turned around, leaving the pained calls for me behind.
Now:
I entered my cabin somewhat calmed again. When I saw the pictures in the walls though, an enraged scream escaped me. With a click from riptide, I slashed the pictures on the wall. One by one they fell. Funny though, all slashes cut me away from her, cutting her into pieces with me being in one piece.
All of a sudden, lightning fell as 12 bright lights filled the cabin. A voice of authority filled the cabin saying, "Perseus Jackson! You have been a pain and nothing but trouble to us! You shall now be sent to Tartarus for betraying the gods! Any last words boy?"
I was hurt. All I did was tried to serve the gods and bring peace. But, at this moment, I swore out loud. "Gods of Olympus! I will bring Olympus to its knees! Those who wish evil against me, beware! For I swear on the river Styx, I will be the one to bring Olympus down!" Thunder boomed overhead as Zeus grin fell into an enraged roar. The last I saw was the flash of Zeus's master bolt and then, darkness.
Nobody PoV:
Everyone was shocked by Percy's vow. Not just the vow, but the betrayal or so they thought. For their hero, their leader betrayed them. How could they accept? The word quickly spread to the romans. Their mood fell to the same, or if, not lower then camp half blood. They saw him fight Gaia or terra, save a fellow praetor and defended the camp. How?
The only few who were in a good mood were Zeus, Ares, Athena, Hera, Dionysus. They thoguth of the plan. The thought they succeeded.
Few years later, demigods start disappearing, a mysterious figure start running around saving monsters from demigods. Many gods found this guy interesting. Why did he save monsters? Why can they not sense him. Most importantly, who is he?
Hi guys! I klnow this chapter is kin of short. But, it is a starter for my rewrite! Thanks and I hope you follow this one! Need a beta btw. anyone?
