I am currently editing all the chapters in this story before i beging writing new chapters. I just feel like it needs to be written in a better way before i continue. So heres revised chapter number one. Its really no different so theres no need to reread it if you have already done so.
"Hi Rose!"
I turned to see my friend Mason waving happily at me. I sighed in content. I knew someone. It was my first day of kindergarten at Vampire Academy. Not that that was a big deal, I've lived here my whole life, since my mom sent me here when I was a baby.
Alberta was walking me in and she smiled kindly and told me to go play with Mason. I gave her a hug and ran over to Mason and his friend Eddie. Alberta was like my mom; she took good care of me and already taught me how to properly kick someone so I would be ahead of everyone else in guardian classes.
"Hi Mase, hi Eddie." I said with a big grin. As we waited for class to start we played Strigo vs. Dhampir. Eddie and I were the Dhampir and a girl named Lissa offered to be the moroi we save. Eddie protected the girl Lissa while I kicked Mason the way Alberta had taught me. Eddie and I won and Lissa gave us high fives for saving her.
I looked around the classroom and saw a kid named Jesse Zeklos harrassing another kid. I did not like when royal people though they could beat up on other people, so I was just about to go kick him when I noticed I didn't have to. Lissa walked straight up to him and pushed him onto to the ground. Jesse started to cry, what a wimp, and the teacher came rushing over.
"What happened over here." the teacher asked in exasperation.
Jesse said "Lissa came over and pushed me down and Christian helped." the teacher shook her head and sent Lissa and Christian into the corner. Well that just wasnt going to work in my eyes. They did nothing wrong.
I picked up a book from the ground and chucked it at the teachers head. I also yelled some words that I heard the older novice's say.
"ROSEMARIE HATHAWAY! CORNER NOW!." she screamed at me.
I took my place in the corner next to Lissa and Christian who were talking. Lissa then looked at me with awe in her eyes and said "That was really brave of you to do that for me."
I smiled and said "no problem."
Lissa hugged me and said "Let's be best friends and then you can be my guardian when we graduate."
I held out my pinky and said "pinky swear." she took my pinky with hers and we swore on it. we hugged and then I turned my face toward Christian and asked him "What was Jesse doing to you?"
He sighed and just turned away and mumbled "he said I would become a Strigoi like my parents."
i saw a tear roll down his face when the teacher said "you can come out of time out now." i walked with Lissa's hand in mine, and Christians in hers and went off to play with Eddie and Mason.
