Hi Everyone,
This is short prologue to set some things straight before launching into the story. I was watching the "Test of Friendship" episode with my son when this story came to me. I thought about it some, and realized that, with some tweaks, this would actually make a much better "Part 1" for my Injustice trilogy. Hence no updates on the second part of that story, because of this rewrite.
So when reading, take the following into account:
I am not doing any introductions of the mice. Assumptions are you know who they are, what they look like and their backstory. If you don't, you are too young to be reading an "M" rated story in this category anyway.
There will be an upsetting scene in this story, and Vinnie fans will hate me for it. I won't reveal the nature of it, so as not to reveal spoilers, but in my opinion things would have gotten way more out of hand if a hostility ray is involved than what that episode showed.
I've changed the way the mice met Charley, to fit in with the later part of the story. I also tried to make the aliens crashing to earth without being noticed part more believable, as well as how they were able to speak English and so forth.
English is not my first language, and I was unable to find a beta, so please keep this in mind when reviewing.
Flames and criticism are welcome, but for Pete's sake: don't nitpick. If I mention Vinnie being 5, 4 when he really is 5, 7 – let it go, it's not important. I work off memory and a few fuzzy episodes, and I don't think I'm doing too badly. And often I want something to be slightly different from the story, for my story's purposes.
Video gamers might recognize aliens and names from games such as Mass Effect, Dragon Age and Skyrim. I am terrible at using my imagination to think up original names for creatures and aliens, and thought that since these already exist and look and act awesome, I would use these. If they do pop up, I own nothing of Bioware and Bethesda Studios.
This story is rated M for good reasons. It will be smutty, violent and maybe a choice word or two. After all, these are biker dudes and a mechanic girl, adults, they are all single and often thrusted into some seriously hair raising situations.
